Quick nitpick: no part of this chapter was in 2nd person, even though part of it claimed to be. 2nd Person is when the reader is also the one in the action, so the narration sounds like, "YOU look around," and stuff like that.
Also, you REALLY don't need to label which parts are 3rd person and otherwise. You can tell what it is just by reading it. No story EVER labels what perspective it's written in. It's completely unnecessary.
Quick nitpick: no part of this chapter was in 2nd person, even though part of it claimed to be. 2nd Person is when the reader is also the one in the action, so the narration sounds like, "YOU look around," and stuff like that.
Also, you REALLY don't need to label which parts are 3rd person and otherwise. You can tell what it is just by reading it. No story EVER labels what perspective it's written in. It's completely unnecessary.
How did they open the door...
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You can tall how close they are getting.