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SwiperTheFox
This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.
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Glad that you liked it!
Anything about that first chapter that you'd change?
im almost afraid to ask where you found the picture
(almost)
hmm this has a potential for the slice of life thing but at this particular time it might be better as a clop
At first:
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How i felt when the word 'fixed' came up:
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What i thought of this story:
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I have no life!
Now that I've read it it might do better as a clop.
And this story...gave me funny feelings...not like, super-boner feelings, but, made my stomach lurch...particularly when the word 'fixed' came up....
It makes me think that (And since this is in a 'you' sort of style) Zecora's gunna chop my nuts off.
Twilight does seem like a bit of a bitch in this chapter, I guess she's getting tired of being the "Director of Fixing" or whatever. I would also say that 'Scamper's' overall lack of personality is simply him trying to not make trouble. At least this is a multi-parter.
Fuckin CMC...
Im liking the continuity you have goin here with Peaches hanging in the offscreen background.
Is it just me or is "HiE being common occurance in Equestria rather than unique phenomenon" the new trend on FIMfiction?
cant wait
Well, a little out of character for Twilight...and why does everyone love the CMC so much?
But I love the world you've built for these clopfics.
YES!!
MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!
zecora better be a good lay
cuz im exited for some hawt zebra action
2nd favorite paring
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YAY!!
NOW I WANT MORE ZECORA!!!
569174 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
DAT PIC
i wanna get fixed to
best story! need more
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Anthro.... I'm out.
But due to my code of honor I have to hit the like button for it being well written.
Humans are CaptainKirks, I can dig it.
Oh boy, I have lost a lot of respect for canon Twilight recently and seeing her behave like this in your story has only lessened her appeal, for it fits quiet believably with her character. I honestly feel sorry for these unfortunate humans, for as much as I'd like to fulfill my pony-sex fantasies, I would rather die than live as a second-class citizen and unwanted nuisance... which either way seems to be the ultimate outcome.
BAHAHAHAHA
dear god i was freaking out in the first chapter
but god that was a good one
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Awwww YEA!
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Why the hell is every Zecora fic centered around her flank and herbal aphrodisiacs?
Loved it regardless.
You might want to update the summary. Not only is the Human tag missing, but you mentioned that the story was rated Teen...
569236WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING HERE BOSS?!!!!
I off to tell LUNA!!*runs*
Domesticating These Human Boys, Falling At My Hooves Like Little Toys.
Note the addition of 'little', sounds a bit better that way I think.
Anyway. Just how hard is laughing too hard? Cause I laughed up a storm reading this, I think my heart might have stopped once.
ALRIGHTY THEN!
this was quite epic if I may so myself.
Eh. Zecora isnt to my taste. More Twi.
But good story anyway, even though I woulda rather had Twi instead.
Well well. Looks like we've found the Equestria of Princess Molestia.
Ok, sooooo it appears that getting "fixed" has a different meaning in Equestria than on Earth... still not sure if I would submit to such a "domesticating" procedure, but it is preferable to the alternative. It has been a while since I've read one of your stories, and I once again must praise you one your sense of pacing and comedic timing; I am especially impressed that you finished this story less than 24 hours after you were asking for requests.
569633 oh no you dont!
*runs after you*
So... Does Twi have feelings for Scamper or not? Im a little confused.
OMG didn't see that coming from Twilight
Good story!
569852OH YES I AM!!
RD HELP ME!!
you didnt claim me! so you dont get my help!
CRAP!
*hijacks a bike and goes even faster*
569900 how about we not do this on someone else's story
569903SURE!
on skype it should be fiii-nnooooo
no no nooo...
I gues on my page!*runs towards user page!*
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It's a good thing Twilight decided to not be an asshole again like in the first chapter, Or i would of disliked it,
Well, crap. Imagine if he wasn't okay with this. That'd be kind of rape.
Bleh.
This story left a bad taste in my mouth, but not because of the quality, but because of the idea. Not that this is a bad thing, mind you. This is a creative idea, and it was expertly written (even if I did skip over the clop like I do with all other stories.). It's kind of interesting, actually. I'd actually like to see it expanded a bit.
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I do want to make a point about the tone. I do know that there is a creepy kind of undertone, that the ponies will 'fix' the humans whether they like it or not, but I'm trying more for farce and satire than anything with... implications. Also, Twilight is kind of jerk-ish in the first chapter for the reasons revealed in the last chapter, right as the story ends. Wouldn't you act kind of the same way in Twilight's situation?
You just wrote Zecora Porn in ryhme. How does that make you feel?
Because to be quite honest this makes me soooooo happy.
I'd make a longer comment, but I'm on my iPod watching a Korean Horror movie.
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I thought you said that you browse fimfiction with your handy-dandy new laptop?
Anyways... glad that you liked it! This was super fun to do, except for the rhymes. Those were a gigantic pain in the rear.
Zecora is so f---ing sexy.
Why is twilight such an asshole in this story?
Of course. CMC just has to ruin everything in almost every story with a human!
Wait a minute! If pony magic doesn't work on humans, how did the 'make giant' spell do anything?
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As I said in the clopfic directory, I should have made it clear that magic doesn't work on humans, period, and that what Sweetie did with her weird helmet thingy was a total freak accident that surprised the hay out of Twilight + everypony else. I guess I skipped tge much detail on that.
What I imaged what what happened with the P-90X thing (I didn't write this because I wanted to get to the sex faster) is that the spell per se didn't work, but that it created some unholy form of electromagnetic energy / radiation / strange matter / something like that as a residue then it worked which did make " "you" transform temporarily (like in the Marvel superhero transform sense, guy is bitten by an alien and becomes a meta-human). And then Twilight cured "you" scientifically, w/o magic.
570991 Because she no longer has one
if you know what i mean