Discord and Celestia have fled from the shackles of the castle and are living free to cause chaos. Only Problem? Celestia doesn't know how. Discord is put through his paces as day after day he must try and make Celestia shake off years of royal etiquette and 'proper' magic training while Celestia worries his magic is having an adverse effect on her free will.
Sequel to Controlled Chaos, Chaotic Control but it's not necessary you read that first. Though it would be nice.
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A squeal? What a pleasant surprise (understatement), already enjoying it so far.
567730 glad you like it.
575423 aw shucks
thanks!
Hey. I wrote this kinda late at night so forgive if this doesn't show my best work. The next chapter will hopefully be better.
No problems, I'm loving the story so far and loved the prelude too. Also I can't believe this thing only got 7 likes so far... It deserves way more.
586503 Thanks! That makes me feel better about this chapter
586517
Perhaps you uploaded this story while everyone was asleep? That would explain the lack of comments ect. I'ma go add it to a bunch of relevant groups.
EDIT: on second thought they may not get this one, I'll add your first story instead.
586525 well a lot of people are from different countries so it just depends. And really? Thanks! You're awesome.
586537
I know that you probably write for fun more than anything, but I do believe this deserves better. Out of curiosity which country do you live in? you may have ended up posting things while the majority of people are asleep.
586569 Well I live in Britian. I posted this chapter at 4am which is around... 11pm on the east coast of America. I should get into the habit of posting things sooner but I tend to write at night as there are less distractions so I don't think.
586607
Well I too often stay up past 3am and live in Britain ,near Newcastle. In future, the first time you post a chapter wait before doing so and post it at the correct time so the stories on the front page when people are on, then just update whenever.
586627 I'll make sure to do that. Thanks
Nice, a sequel!
So far I think it's pretty good. I think I've never seen another fanfic where is Discord the ones who teaches to Celestia. This will be fun.
591156 That was actually the inspiration. I kept seeing fics where Celestia trys to calm Discord down but since I tried to do that in the last fic (and failed. The original ending to the last fic was a lot different but Discords dialogue didn't fit with his personality so I changed it
) I decided to flip it!
OH GOD!
A draquennicorn!
636532 Oh god that's amazing. Mind if I steal that?
636538
not at all...
636544 Thanks
:3
OH SHIT SON!
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I was not expecting that twist, I was expecting his magic to be influencing her, but daym. I like where this is going.
Oh, I would love to see Discord's face!
Another great chapter, I wasn't expecting that surprise at the end.
DIS GON B GUD
I was thinking of some pony else's magic,but...HOT DAYUUUM!
please continue!
THATS AMAZING!!!!!! IM DYING OF LAUGHTER!!!!!! I cant wait to see how this progresses.
636538 Did you ever read the ballad of echo the diamond dog by Rust? it's a really good story and in that discord and celestia have a son named Prince Disarray Entropius.
A baby! YAY!!!!
MOAR!