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I write so that one day I may finally stop writing and be free, but these damn new ideas keep finding ways into my brain. I need to write more to vent them out!

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Comment section minigame for the story My Friend Tenty (anypony is welcome to play this game in the comment section of this story)

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Does this story remind you of a song that you know? If yes, post it in the comments in the following format:
- A link or embedded Youtube video of it.
- Percentage of correlation (0% being an unrelated song, 100% being a song written exactly for this story).
- Reason why this song reminded you of this story or the excerpt of the lyrics that resonates with this fic in some way.

Music recommendations for reading this story:
Sentenced - Broken — Correlation: 70% (Lyrics)
The fire in my heart is dying — and the zeal I had is gone
I am dying down growing weaker now — It could seem that I'm doing fine — but I'm broken to little pieces deep inside

Lahannya - Never Enough — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
Never before did I plead — You got me on my knees — Caught in your embrace — Till you let go of me

Inkubus Sukkubus - Midnight Queen — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
And when your heart is filled with fear — Close your eyes for she is here — She's always there

5708417 I LUV ur story!!!

Ha! This is a very believable problem when one culture who sees rape as abhorrent meets another one who sees it as, at most, slightly rude. Liked.

Hmm... rape, rape and anal infection.

(69% because of rape)
Anal seepage flowing - She cried out helplessly as I ripped her limb from fucking limb.

Very inventive twist, there.

This story:

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10/10 would ask to wrap me up in tentacles :yay:

On a more serious note: I love how you mix the silly content with properly crafted backstory. One moment I find myself getting immersed in the details of tentacle pony society, the next moment everypony gets raped... :rainbowlaugh:

*Rated Mature for using the ‘R’ word in dialogue.

Geez, I hope it was the admins who forced you to mark it as "mature" for that. Either way, I think it's bullshit... :ajbemused:

Rated Mature for profound cultural differences regarding the importance of consent.

i know of a friend who would completely love to read this

What the bloody fuck, rape is just how their way of arguing, fucking hell that's interesting/crazy/creepy/funny way of sorting out your problems. Mind broke for a moment earlier, but I'm fine now.

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Ha! This is a very believable problem when one culture who sees rape as abhorrent meets another one who sees it as, at most, slightly rude. Liked.

It’s not just with rape. Different cultures hold different morals in high regard. Without adaptation of personal views, the clashes are inevitable. When the shit hits the fan, individuals will resort back to what they know and that is usually defined by the culture they were raised in.

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(69% because of rape)

Anal seepage flowing - She cried out helplessly as I ripped her limb from fucking limb.

Thank you for playing the Comment section minigame.

Unfortunately, the song you posted focused a little too much on dismemberment. It did, indeed, feature the lack of consent. I’ll give it a good 30% relevance (about 40% is needed to be featured in the first comment). You may try again if you wish.

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Very inventive twist, there.

Run! :pinkiecrazy:

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10/10 would ask to wrap me up in tentacles

Mmm, tentacles. :rainbowwild:

Geez, I hope it was the admins who forced you to mark it as "mature" for that. Either way, I think it's bullshit...

This story failed moderation as ‘teen’.

I’ll just paste admin’s PM to me here, without his consent (because I’m evil like that). :trixieshiftleft:

Your story My Friend Tenty has failed moderation on FimFiction for the following reason: The contents, dialogue and/or themes used in your story require it to be rated ‘Mature’.

I don't really care for 'rape-humor' but whatever. It's certainly not teen.

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Rated Mature for profound cultural differences regarding the importance of consent.

Would you believe me if I told you that I initially wanted to publish this as ‘everyone’ rated? It’s just cultural differences.

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i know of a friend who would completely love to read this

Tell me about this friend of yours.

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What the bloody fuck, rape is just how their way of arguing, fucking hell that's interesting/crazy/creepy/funny way of sorting out your problems. Mind broke for a moment earlier, but I'm fine now.

For a moment there, I thought you didn’t share my point of view. :trollestia:

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You seem confused. Here, try focusing on this tentacle.
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she's an advocate of tentacle ponies the world round.

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It is worth noting that some of the most terrible acts of destruction in human history stem from cultural differences far smaller than this.
But this place is not really suited for that sort of philosophical discussion.:trollestia:

5737985 Perhaps I know your friend. Is she the creator of the Omni OC on DeviantArt?

5737997 Indeed. People can be very petty, sometimes.

I...errr....I think I don't even , but I am not even sure.
My brain bugued while I was reading this. I get that ths is because of cultural differences but ... yeah ... I don't even know how to speak anymore.
You kind of involuntarily , just a little bit , slightly raped my mind with this story.
I mean , you managed to write a story about cultural differences and ethnocentrism using tentacle rape as a medium !
Yeah , I am going to like this , for everything that I said above.
Wouldn't mind seing a continuation of this either.

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no, i don't think so. though she does rock the picture as an icon on here.

5738058

You kind of involuntarily , just a little bit , slightly raped my mind with this story.

Mind rape. *gasp*
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Wouldn't mind seeing a continuation of this either.

Well, I could show you some Tenty Rape role playing, but I'd have to ask my RP partner for permission first.

I've also entertained an idea of world building of the society, but nothing serious yet. It probably won't happen. Especially since I'm having a bit of a rough time with writing lately. Just this week, I've put 12 of my writing projects on hiatus. I also relapsed into my video games addiction after 2 years of abstinence. Maybe I just need a break. Either way, I can't give any promises on my future writings.

5738081 I hope your friend finds this story enjoyable.

5738082 I'm glad you found this story to be good enough. I've worked on it for 3 months, trying to make it perfect. It broke me a little.

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i'll let you know whenever i send said person the link

Well, now we know where the ponies with strong libidos are going to be sneaking off to. 'Debate club' with the Tentacle Ponies.

5738196 Why go to tentacle ponies if you can just take most of the adults ones and bring them home with you. :trollestia:

50%
Lust - Ignored - All they have is just bow-dow-bada-doowow weeneenerweenerwow

This was a really weird fic.

Tatzljack is still my favourite tentacle pony

I think we have something in common. I would love to introduce you, she's my friend too. Meet Slaphappy

I liked it!

That...
That was different...

5738235 Thank you for playing the Comment section minigame.
I think your previous song that you posted one was even more relevant. This one is more or less about reminiscing. I’ll give it a good 20% (about 40% is needed to be applicable in the first comment of this story).

5738356

This was a really weird fic.

Thank you. :twilightsmile:

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Tatzljack is still my favourite tentacle pony

He is grand, indeed. Such prehensility.
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I think we have something in common. I would love to introduce you, she's my friend too. Meet Slaphappy

Oh, I know Tentacle Slaphappy. It was her thread that inspired me. We PM each other regularly. She was one the first one to read this story, even before it was published. She said she liked it. *squee*

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I liked it!

Yey!

5738934

That...

That was different...

It's okay to experiment a little. Sometimes, different is good.

5739578

When I went in to this story I expected rape...

My god.... Why!!!

Did you get what you were looking for?

Huh.

This actually seems like an almost profound rendition of the culture clash that happens when two groups with completely different values come together and try to act 'nice' to eachother. And with rape, this is a thing that could actually happen: while not quite human, bonobos probably have the same amount of rapeyness as the tentacle monsters in this story.

And I just expected that a tentacle monster would rape everything and that would be the whole story. It seems even I can fall prey to cultural assumptions.

So you've won. Feel free to use your tentacles on me to your heart's content. Don't be gentle.

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*a tentacle pats you on the head*

This needs a sequel.

5740273 You're welcome to write a spin-off if you want.

That cover art is the scariest f**king thing I have ever seen in my entire life

It's funny but it honestly feels more like an intro to a bigger story than a one shot. MAKE MOAR

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i believe my friend enjoyed your story

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That cover art is the scariest f**king thing I have ever seen in my entire life

Imagine one coming at you with all those waving around.

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It's funny but it honestly feels more like an intro to a bigger story than a one shot. MAKE MOAR

There is another story about a tentacle filly, inspired by this story. Maybe you can also enjoy that one: Pink Tentacles

5743158

tentacles! :heart:

*sinks his face in your tentacle mane*
:heart:

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i believe my friend enjoyed your story

Yey!

I seem to like your friends.

5743572
*hugs*
*my tentacles study your face*

Rated M for using the "R" word? That's a bit far. I mean, the only real reason a story should be rated mature is for intense sexual scenes, or extreme gore.

5745380 You need to tell this to story approvals. This story failed submission for being teen rated.

5745385 Derp. You think if they would have done that, they would have told you to put a sex tag on there too. Mods are dumb sometimes.

5745418 Their site; their rules. All you can do is bow your head and take it.

5708417
I find this song more fitting.

But this song is more fitting with Jeffy Dahmer:pinkiecrazy::heart:

5743572 didnt say it wasn't sexy tho

:trollestia:

5745886 Thank you for playing the Comment section mini game Your song almost made the list (I give it about 32% relevance for the theme match). Unfortunately, there are some problems with it:
- The gender of the character in the song doesn't match
- Sure, Tenty is very 'friendly' toward Sweetie Belle, but I doubt she's her best friend just yet. Further 'convincing' would have to ensue to reach that plateau.

What can I say, I'm very picky when it comes to correlating songs.

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