Fluttershy attempts online dating. It goes well until she runs across a red and black alicorn.
Written for this god-awful contest. Curse you, Rage Reviews!
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Monstrosity I think this is truly a fic of beauty wonder and enlightenment
it's so cheesy that it's brilliant. brilliant i say.
I puked so much I began to puke rainbows.
It's sad that if you ever read a black and red alicorn fic this will be the best one you ever find. Great job Famous I bet you still have SOME dignity after writing this.
This story is so ridiculous I have no choice to read it...
...but something this weird has to be saved for midnight. After guzzling down a few Dr. Peppers.
5699867 taste the rainbow. puke the rainbow.
5701407 nah. I helped him out on that, but I did fav. this.
5702577 got a laugh out of it, but can't laugh a whole lot at the moment.
oh my fucking god
i loved this but it needs to be said that my facepalm was so intense it did a 180.
basically i slapped my computer.
At least Celestia didn't use any of these lines.
What is this I dont even
God that chat, those terrible awful pick-up lines.
I don't know what I expected, but that ending made me bust a gut. Excellent. You've earned an upvote and fave. If this story means you lose your dignity, then I say it was worth it.
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You should check out Twilight Turns Into A Red And Black Alicorn for one that plays it perfectly straight.
Also, GG, Famous. You trooper.
5703052 I never turn down a challenge. I'm aware the editing is horrendous, but about halfway through, I realised I had only 15 minutes to finish it. It was not pretty.
Aww...just like Lucifer.
That was great
I hope you are proud of yourself
*Claps slowly*
That...was hilarious.
"Lied" has nothing to do with position. This should be lay.
As for the story itself, pretty interesting. The grammar mistake right at that beginning did throw me off a bit.
This is beautiful.
5702769 My favorite:
Waaaaa
This is beautifully horrendous.
I love it.
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I laughed for about five minutes after reading that.
She strikes again!
If Fluttershy can immediately be bought over by chatup lines like those, then I wonder how Mr. Alicorn would fare against Rarity.
DONUT STTEEEEAAAAAALLL!!!
Why do you do this, why?
Just wanted to throw that out before I read it.
-The Character
Trollestia ftw
One word describes this fic:
Win.
Bwahahahaha
Poor Flutters
Bad Celi!
Dear author: Have a like and a moustache
Loved this! Priceless!
This makes me imagine Celestia doing it not for fun, but because she knows of all the potential dangers of online dating. Thus she tries to dissuade everypony form using it in a roundabout approach, so they instead go out and date the old fashion style.
But let's not overanalyze. Occam's razor says it's just because
Read it. Enjoyed it. Nearly made a fool of myself literally laughing out loud.
congrats on your placement man. well done.
DEATH TO BAD OC'S!!!
5707368 I have to yet to use my real OC, Poptart (see avatar) in a story. Lol, instead I opt for these horrid meta things.
In my book to be a bad oc. The oc has to be colored red, black and optionally white
5707368 Unfortunately, you will find none here.
Beating Celestia with a stick might work, though.
5703052 I've already read that story and I do agree it is quite good, but I think this is the best only because I was laughing my ass off through it.
Wow Celestia you butt
"Actually, a swarm of butterflies caught me"
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I did NOT see that ending coming! XD
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You are the tuna to my casserole.
5864424 The fries to the bottom of the McDonalds bag.
Alternative ending.
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