It has been ten years since Tirek was defeated, and now the Cutie Mark Crusaders are all grown up. Sweetie Belle has a foal named Emerald. Apple Bloom is engaged. And at the same time, Scootaloo is waiting for her response from the Wonderbolt Academy. Want to know more? Stay tuned!
Thanks to xStellar_Bubbles for the artwork!
And thanks to FelineFluff for editing AND big shoutout to her as well for writing the first, third, and fifth chapter.
This is going to be a thing where I write all of the even numbered chapters and she writes all of the odd numbered chapters. We hope you enjoy it!
#BESTSTORYEVER!!!!!
I'm going to read this later
ITS APPROVED!! I loved writing ths!,
5702311 thanks for being he firast to let me know that it was approved!
Bad problem!!!! You didn't post the edited version!!!!
5702323 you have to press edit, then paste the edited version!!, this is all wrong!!!
5702333 WHAT?!
5702337 I'll text you how
wonderful job
5702368 did you already read the second chapter? Because it's not quite done yet, she accidently submitted it with the un-edited version
5702381 then I shall go and read it, point out her errors, like I always do for her stories
5702381 I just fixed it
5702392 it's already edited, but it needs to be fixed. Please don't read it yet!
5702398 I shall wait
5702399 it is now fixed, you can point out MY mistakes now :)
5702404 gladly
5702404 so far, I did not really see any mistakes, awesome job
5702408 maybe in the second chapter, but the first chapter was edited better
5702412 yep
Third and fourth chapter will be done before the 15th
5702427 lets hope!
5702427 wait, THAT'S THE DAY AFTER MY BIRTHDAY! YAY!
5702437 happy birthday!!!
5702440 it's not till march 14!
5702445 lol I know!
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5702337
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...hahahahahHahaHaHahaHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
*falls on floor and dies*
5702861 what?
5702861 XD I died laughing too!!!
5702868 WHAT?!
Who disliked this story?!? I need to know, so I can go get Angel to destroy your life!!!(mostly just your garden ) but thanks to the people who liked it
5702873 When you said "my birthday is on the 14th!!!!!" When I said happy bday!!!
5702879 I didnt think about angel!
5702894 Yup! He's the perfect punishment for haters!!!
5702873 Baka...
5702416 I edited the second chapter MAJORLY, so if you haven't read it yet, you still can point out any mistakes
5705010 I will do that
i like it and SweetyBelleluvsu are you going to mark this story as complete now since this is the last chapter for this story
5786080 oh, there is... one... chapter... left... To be written by 5705010!
Um, Feline, you almost done with that?
5786099 oh ok
5786102 the last chapter is up now, and marked as complete!
This was awesome!
5702113 I counted only four sentences that either had grammitcal errors, misspellings or inconsistencies.
You might want to fix that.
""Hey, that's not a word!" Scootaloo said releasing from the hug, and fighting with Apple Bloom." (I think you meant Sweetie Belle.)
Emerald is a lot like you Sweetie! Clumsy, cute, and obsessed with waffles! Babs Seed said with a giggle. (You forgot the quotation marks.
Sweetie Belle, and Babs sat back at the table, and continued their chat. (I think you meant Applebloom.
Other than that, I had to pause every now and then because THE CHAPTER WAS SO FUNNY, I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING! I loved the dictionary irony and the interactions you made between the characters superb.
All right, on to the next one.
I think you meant "did."
Forgive.
Wow. I actually love this chapter. For a moment there, I really thought there was going to be a scuffle between the two stallions. Glad cool heads prevail. Well done.
5791443 Well, technically, there was. But I didn't really want a big fight so that's how it ended. Oh, and blame FelineFluff for the errors, not me.
Aw man that was funny.
This is not bad. I actually liked this chapter. Rainbow Dash trying to look serious is funny.
5791714 Omg I messed up a lot XD thanks for the review though! If I have time, I'll fix stuff. I'm glad you liked it
You just hugged someone with out knowing why?
oooooo. I didn't see that one coming.
AJ really needs to cool down man.
Great chapter. I liked it.
Wow Feline. You must really love cats.
Well, this was a cute chapter.
Short and sweet.