One early morning, Pinkie Pie found herself with curled up mane, but couldn’t go back to sleep, so she chose to go out on a stroll in the dark, armed with nothing but the flashlight and her silly antics.
Once on the street, she bounced along the road, only to find the lost Pony, slowly moving towards her.
Giggling, Pinkie Pie approaches the stranger, beaming with joy, not yet sure what the Pony was. Yet, when had this ever stopped her before. All she ever wanted, is that next friend to cheer up and share a laugh with. Who could blame her?
Chapters (3)
Sorry. really I am, I simply can't bring myself to read any further than this. I do try my utmost to be patient with people's work as i'd like to think people would be with anything I made. Missing words and typos get the best of us, and i do follow a few stories that put out 'unedited' chapters and yet are fairly entertaining.
Might I suggest find a proof-reader to help with grammer and sentence structure? This would definetly benefit from some tidying up.
...and that's why i'll never be a career critic, I hate having to give opinions like this.
6533864 Assuming you are not referring to issues Canonically tied to Pinkie Pie, there may still be issues to address.
Sadly, I have no editor or similar help with my stories. I try to make due with the editorial tools like Spell check and Google translate.
I try to re-edit stories from time to time, I can always try to go over the story in search for anything I could improve upon.
There are a few instances where I notice typos, or missing words, particularly with older stories.
If you care to elaborate and point out specific instances, I would appreciate it greatly.
Thanks in advance.