• Member Since 18th Apr, 2014
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Maerx


Sing a song for the ones who never made it

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Now a high ranking Wonderbolt & veteran flyer, Rainbow Dash has it all.
She has fame, fortune and unwavering support from her friends. She couldn't be happier.

Then why is her mind so troubled lately...?

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Comments ( 5 )

Um... first, and also damn. Them feels. I really enjoyed reading this story. For a shorter composition, it was impeccably written. I enjoyed every moment of this fic. As a "feels" kinda guy, this made me squee, then cry. Well done, sir slash madam. Well done. :moustache:

P.S. Don't stop writing! Also, this kinda made me want a sequel. I mean, I'm not gonna push for one, but I definitely would appreciate seeing one. I loves me some Twidash.

5730541 (Sir.) Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed my latest work. :twilightsmile:
I'm not sure a sequel feels appropriate however, given that the story addressed that the avenue Dash was seeking is closed for good, implying that Twilight has found somepony special to her, outside of friendship.

I don't plan on stopping writing anytime soon, my friend.

Now then, allow me to be your first follower :pinkiehappy:

monochrome

You keep using that word. I don't think it means what you think it means.

5732230 I suppose technicolor or its synonyms would be better?

Edit: Fixed. Thanks for pointing them out :twilightsmile:

Two things stand out to me after having reread this fic for the first time in a while:
1. It's amazing how irreconcilable this fic has been with canon ever since Newbie Dash came out. It's still good as a fic, but if it had been written now, it definitely would get the AU tag.
2.

Fluttershy owning and running an animal sanctuary outside of Ponyville.

Talk about Hilarious In Hindsight, because you called that almost two years in advance.

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