Just a talk

A dragon comes to Ponyville. His target? Twilight Sparkle. His purpose, unknown. Twilight will just have to find out what he desires.

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Limelight02

Limelight02 #1 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

Good story.

Bronzedragon

Bronzedragon #2 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

Sorry to look like a nit picker but I like this story to much to leave these in it. most seem to be you just writing too fast one or two could be just differences of opinion. waiting for what ever you are foreshadowing.

Ok, I want you (to ) go and
Fluttershy to ind someplace to hide [find]
It wa just so much easier [ was]
“Only one thing, a thing that only ( ) give me [ you can ] ????
“I am afriad to say that [ afraid ]
“Tea?! Oh, sure, give ( ) a few seconds [ me ]
wanted something rom Twilight [ from ]
Dash exclaimed, ling above her [ ????]
...neverous at my presence [ nervous ]
I, myself, is [ am ] ????
much like good metalliacs exsist [ bad ???] [ metallics ] [ exist ]
“Nature versus nuture [ nurture ]
what you feel or the whelp [ for ]
to raise ( ) dragon whelp [ a ]
more than extradorinary [ extraordinary ]
They pocess great [ possess ]
adopted species for ( ) until they [ years ]
Sometimes I wonder ( ) I deserve [ if ]