Rarity, forced into a new life by the flames of war, journeys north to find an ancient magic that may be the last hope to save Equestria from total destruction and the wrath of The Red Alliance.
Cover art is done by myself.
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I am completely stunned on the lack of feedback, votes, and just over all attention this story has gotten. It deserves so much more than what has come it's way. The story Is so far very good, and I'm hooked. The over all tone and atmosphere of Rarity's journey is what caught my attention the most, so I'm looking forward to new characters slowly, but surely being introduced, like in this chapter specifically. There are some grammar/spelling errors, but are very minor in each chapter. Nothing that can't be fixed. I do hope this story continues to update in the future.
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Hello there friend, first of all, thank you very much for the feedback, you praise is accepted very graciously and very humbly and secondly, yes this story is being continued, but it's in the process of a big re-write, because whilst I do think it's ok, I think I can do much better. I think in its current state it's moving a little too fast from point to point, and what I want to put across most of all is the loneliness and seclusion of Raritys journey, but also the grandiosity of it and I think the way it's going now wouldn't allow me to properly create the world and atmosphere I'm after, so this soon will be replaced by something that has all the same key moments but is a bit fuller, a bit more adventurous and a bit more exciting, so if you're interested, keep an eye on this space. Thank you once again for your kind words, I'll strive to weed out those errors with grammar/spelling and to do better!
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I understand your desire to rewrite what you've done, start fresh in a sense. I'll be sticking around for the impending change to come. So you can look forward to comments from me in the future as it is progressing. Especially if it's what we've seen, but possibly even better. I will do my best to rather point out said errors next time though. I do wish you my best of luck!