Oh Twilight... I'm disappointed, dood.

5747925 Why the disappointment?

5749953 Twilight used the dick spell on someone else, dood. Do I need any other reason to be disappointed in her, dood?

5751888 Nah, you gotta be you, clearly. Though it's possible this isn't the last time she'll bust out that particular spell.

I just always crave more detailed feedback, so was wondering if that was the reason or something else. Thanks.

5756779 Oh yeah, feedback is always good, except when it's me bitchin about Twilight using a dick spell on somepony else... then it's just me crying about Twilight getting fucked instead of doing the fucking, dood.

I would've hoped to save the orgy for later and instead spend a chapter working RD up until she gave in to AJ and Twilight's teasing. Now there's no tension for "will Rainbow hold out or not?" And while this was really hot, it was a little absurd, too. I think you could've dragged it out a little longer, with sexy results. Maybe they leave after AJ's story feeling a little awkward, wondering whether their next night will devolve into an orgy, and whether they want it or not.

On other thoughts, I liked Rainbow's story the most, but having AJ tell her story while mounting Twilight was very creative.

5759206 Fair enough, that was originally the plan, but I found it didn't really feel substantive enough with just the dueling stories.

Also, I found it a bit unrealistic the other way - once you get to the point that you're watching two of your friends actually in coitus, things (in my admittedly limited experience) tend to escalate.

Damn!

Hot. I do kind of wish you described the orgasm more, maybe describe Twi actually being filled with seed(cum inflation may or may not be my fetish), but all things considered it's a good chapter.

6232891 i am neither confirming nor denying that i may or may not be alluding to a possibility of the chance that i am or am not likely turned off or on to the idea that cum inflated ponies could be hot.