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Pokey Pierce is a snobby, uptight, prude of a pony. When he goes to stay with his best friend in Ponyville for the weekend, he is forced to a party where he meets a bubbly pink ball of joy, named Pinkie Pie. He finds her annoying and disruptive, but after he goes back to his home in Canterlot, he can't seem to stop thinking about that caffeinated pony.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 15 )

Silly author, Pinkie doesn't drink coffee, she drinks liquid sugar.

559626
That explains so much!:pinkiehappy:

Just read the chapter, and I like this idea quite a bit.

559640
Thank you!
I'm very new to writing pony-fiction,
And I know like, nothing about this shipping,
But my best friend has an obsession,
So I'm giving it a go:twilightsmile:
I always appreciate the feedback!

I like it!!:heart::pinkiehappy:

good stuff more, please :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

>BG pony pops a ballon
>Suddenly, fan-fic.

559694
Haha-
Personally, I don't know a lot about this pairing,
Or the origin,
But it seems to be fairly popular,
And this is for my friend.:twilightsmile:

This is nice! Very sweet, no pun intended. I shall favorite this until it hurts!

Love the story so far:heart::ajsmug:

559694
More like
>BG pops a balloon.
>Suddenly second most shipped character with pinkie pie.

You don't need to separate a character's speech from their actions, you know. It makes things disjointed and hard to read.

Other than that...it seems a little rushed, but I can't really tell for certain until the next chapter.

You have my attention...for now.

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