This is the story of one, Cerulean Blaze and Scootaloo, the Cutie Mark Crusader. Although the two are foals, both individuals have an instant bond, and this is the story of said bond told through Cerulean's perspective in the format of 2nd.
What is to be is meant to be, but if it isn't, it simply isn't. Will a simple friendship develop into something more, or will it end up on its South end? Only time can factorize this fortune.
I will keep an eye out for updates
Great chapter. However, you briefly switched from second person to first person, so you might want to fix that.
I also was taken for a slight surprise because I thought the titular brawl would be between Rumble and Cerulean.
6568692 I was originally going to do that. It seemed more fitting for a switch.
And I thought I fixed that?
Grew chapter, I knew he died, I just wasn't sure how. I really like where this is going.
There may be SOME SPOILERS in the comments section - just a heads up if you haven't read it yet! -Dan
I'm surprised about Rumble. I thought that Cerulean was going to have to go through another roadblock when it comes to him. Also, I dont think Apple Bloom has any right to be upset, she initiated the kiss. Good chapter overall.
Wow, gonna enjoy reading this!!!
Was this a typo, or is Blaze southern? (This is not stereotypical, that is actually true. I live in Louisiana.)
6717275 Cerulean is from Manehatten. The first chapter clarifies that. Thanks for pointing that out, by the way. I corrected it and some other mistakes I found along the way.
I hope we have another chapter coming our way soon
6754235 Not for a long time, I'm afraid. I should be blogging about that soon.
So now that both Scootaloo and Cerulean are no together, what are you going to do with Rumble? Your not gonna leave him hanging, right?
I had hoped for this.
poNAYYYSSS
Yay! It's so nice to see that the story isn't dead! Loved this chapter, fairly simplistic and adorable
That was the most adorable and beautiful part of this chapter
Ohhhhhhh he's got a crush never seen one of these before
6717275 Texas is better and it may be that New York like accent
Aww shat! Diamond tiara got the crap better out of her!
The hell was that? I call it the power of the mind!!!!
Is he going to be all sad and emotional for the past few chapters
Shit so his crush was not his first kiss damnit
6637212 I agree
Heyyyy
Archer is right sisters don't listen
More chapters!!!!
The only spelling error I managed to find in the entire chapter, also congratulations, you fooled me with the foreshadowing but I sort of missed any symbolism you put in the chapter.
Nice to see that the new colt isn't just black and white, and that they'll be used again... Right? There's too much you're hinting at for you to end it there... Please tell me there'll be a sequel?
If this was me I wouldn't go to school tomorrow