Rainbow Dash had never forgiven the ShadowBolts for trying to take her away, so when she discovers that they where spotted over Ponyville, she tells all her friends to inform her of any news. Applejack would do anything to help her fellow Element Bearer, but life becomes difficult for her when she is forced to lie to her best friend to protect an injured ShadowBolt member. How will Applejack protect her little white lie? And will this lie destroy Applejack's honesty?
The reader is left wondering, "Who is MISCHIEFPOP, and what did they do to deserve this, of all things, on their birthday?"
Mischiefpop Is my closest friend in my class, she is also a brony and also dose her own stories
This looks like a good read. I'll definitely be keeping track of this story.
I'll be keeping an eye on this
Diablo? Thats 'crazy chicken' right?
Diablo is spanish for devil
Ooo me likely I've got my eye on this story
Hmm I wonder where this is going
... Some pony is planning revenge on Applejack? Well, it can't be Diablo, his wing is hurt! Could it be his girl friend? Well I guess I'll just have to wait! YAY a new chapter!!!!!
I'm liking where this is going. Although, you never really announced what this stallions name was, did you? idk, I'm assuming his name is Diablo, since that's the title of this story and he and Aj are on the cover. Anyway, I hope the next chapter comes out soon.
You discover his name in a chapter to come but I glad you are liking it
NEW CHARTER YUSSSSSSS. well I have a theory on his name maybe descent
Well, Aj lied, and now has a staker. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good luck.
How is AJ going to be able to lie?
We shall see... Dun dun dunnnnn
This was awesome!!!!!!
MOAR!!!! please...
Oh, I cannot tell you how much I love this story, no matter where it goes... Okay, that's a lie. Kill AJ and your dead too! But if you avoid that, you'll be just fine! ...for now
It's getting better with every chapter I love their conflicts and it's nice to watch how Diablo and AJ are getting closer to each other. Can't wait for the next one!
This is so wonderful, need more!!
Omg, I loved that Zelda reference!
don't hate me but what zelda refrance? coz I don't play it
6042796 Well, I haven't heard the word "deku" be used anywhere but Zelda so I assumed. My mistake. Might just me being a dumbass... again.
5897987 Actually, killing AJ could be something interesting to the plot. Perhaps Diablo could go into an all out rage against this other Shadow bolt, killing her maybe. It'd be cliché, yes, but it'd also be interesting.
6045093 It's a good argument... BUT I REFUSE TO BELIEVE!
The story plot line is all planned out and the next chapter will get done as soon as I can
Woah, new chapter! I was thinking about this story today!
Yay!! Another chap! When will part two be out?
Next week hopefully
I know I shouldn't be looking that far into the future, but I can't help but be excited for when the romance kicks in. I absolutely love romance (No pun intended), and probably the reason I started this story. Although, I have to say something. I probably should have said this earlier, but I think Diablo's liking, or, At least, acceptance, Of AJ was a bit rushed. I mean, you don't just become okay with something overnight. Still though, don't stop being awesome.
I can see why you have said that, I will try to explain why he has been so nice and had such a turn of heart
OMG what's happening *freaks out*
Nice chapter. It does pose more questions than answers. Good luck with the next part.
I have about 10 qustions that need to be answered some will be answered on the next chapter, but Iam glad you liking the story most the chapters have been planned and I can't wait to get them done
Iam a little disappointed with yet another dislike on this story not sure if Its story or something else. I would like to know the reason for the dislikes
ok first I will say I find this story to be a really good read.
the editing is really good the base story line is put together good.
now the thing that got me to look at this story is the name Diablo for those of you who do not know Diablo is a MMORPG game that I have played for more then 20 years and still play the newer version to this day.
good luck with your story StoneWare13 I think you have a good story line going here and will most defiantly be watching for more of Diablo.
Harts Fire
Yes! Another chapter.
love it a perfect cliffhanger.
KISS! KISS! KISS! KISS!
6240954 Oh, don't worry. Not everybody's gonna like your stuff. You really shouldn't worry until there are more dislikes than likes.
i would really love to see more of this grate story.
I would love to see more of this