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OCisbestpony


Doughnut Steel.

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There are stories that wind the long trail of complexity, treachery, and scale the mountains of mighty story telling. There are stories that redefine our very perceptions of who we are and what our meaning is in this word.

Needless to say, this is not one of those stories. No, this is a simple story. A simple story about two young humans falling in love.

Taylor, a simple man who works part-time, and Fluttershy, a simple woman who, with her friends, recently moved into town. Together they will learn that which all star destined lovers learn; what it means to finally, truly, and honestly, open one's heart to another.

Author's Note: This was written as a commission for an old friend many moons ago, in which commission they asked that I ship a mutual friend of ours with their favorite pony, Fluttershy. They wanted it simple, clean, and human. So, therefore, I present to you a relic of the past, written prior to season 2.

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Comments ( 21 )

I like it. Better than any of my stories so i congratulate you.

:flutterrage: WHY MUST MOST OF THE FLUTTERSHY EMOTES BE NEGATIVE :flutterrage:

That said, thank you :pinkiesmile:

Interesting premise. I really enjoy self-inserts when done correctly and you seem to be doing a fine job.:twilightsmile:

Ironically enough, I hate them :pinkiehappy:

That aside: thank you for the compliment.

Comment posted by OCisbestpony deleted Feb 21st, 2015

Well, it's finished. Hope you liked the short, little journey.

Awesome, though you have some spelling errors. Quiet.

Einstein, Fermi, Oppenheimer.

Wish there was more. A sequel?

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Clannad: After Story, is that you?

That aside, I never had planned on writing a sequel, though technically the request was to take it all the way to a wedding. Perhaps I should make a follow-up...

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You can imagine how poor Taylor felt!

Spoilers: :pinkiegasp:

Heart: GET HER AWAY FROM ME SHE'S TOO CUTE HELP!

Me: Hey Flutters you can have it

Fluttershy: yay

God dam ut aj look where your going

Applejack steps in) well fluttershy I just got bac- YOU SON OF A BICTH I WILL KILL YOU

7125368 Holy cow, Not everyday somepony comes around this dusty section of Fimfiction!
That said:
I imagine her face was something like this- FWT$QW$GT#^$%YUGSWVQ#FVAQY V^UB^B&Q^Y%ET

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