• Member Since 10th May, 2014
  • offline last seen May 8th, 2016

mlplover17


I'm a person who loves, loves , LOVES MLP: FIM.

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She walked across the street with a cello case and a purple backpack with a black treble clef on her back. She was the most beautiful thing I'd ever seen.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

more please :fluttercry:

Good quality, but very rushed

you put "and my father had my father died"

Could use some improvements, but then again, so should everything in the world.

wow this is so intense. i love how this is more focused on vinyl's perspective rather then octavia's.

keep up the good work. love what you've done so far.

"Sure. I don't mind.</p>

What's with the </p> at the end of this line? Honest curiosity, not trying to hate... Really great story!

Do NOT end it here. This story is too good to kill it here!

...:ajbemused:Gods forsaken cliffhangers...

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