Coco Pommel is visiting Ponyville to help Rarity with a project but will she spark feelings in Spike that were reserved for Rarity?
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I'm a goofy fun loving guy who likes to read, write and play video games. My favorite character is Twilight and my favorite CMC is Apple Bloom. I like Spike stories
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Spike saw a yyoung Mare, would be probably better, since it looks like he is not sure if that is actually Coco, and i don´t know if he got a picture. (i think he was not in Manehatten with the others or was he?)
Rarity, don´t be jealous, you don´t want to be jealous because of Spike
Yeaaahhh while i am not his greatest fan, i like the idea with him and Coco.
I think i keep track of the story, i want to read more, that means good work.
I like this it's such a rare ship. Like the rare ship I did.
5716916 I thought it was pretty rare too so that's why I'm gonna do it.
Sorry it takes so long for me to post a new chapter college is giving so much work my girlfriend wants more attention, my friends want to play call of duty too, I hate having a social life
5718942 I did a rare one too. It got a lot of likes
5718987 bro to solve all those problems just sleep its fixes everything
Ah put this in a bunch of groups for ya.
That makes it better, does that mean he doesn´t really looks like a complete baby there?
It was always part of the reason why i never liked Rarity X Spike.
Nice chapter, i like your Coco.
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He's not a teenage dragon but around the age of teenage ponies, so to put a short description, he is as tall as mares but shorter than stallions, has darker color scheme, shaper teeth but still has a childlike feel, I hope this helps you imagine him.
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Thanks for the compliment I didn't have much to go off of when it came to Coco's personality but I hope I did a good job.
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I'll try my best to stay as consistent as possible.
Dammit Pinkie! Thanks for the Spoilers!
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She keeps doing this to me!
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Wait a minute are you new to my fics?
Hmm, wonder how I missed this fic. Guess I got caught up reading your other one.
Anyway keep up the good work.
needs a bit of editing... though the line that caught my attention the most was
Which could've been solved in one of two ways
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Never saw that thanks bro!
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I will thanks!
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I don't know what you mean, but to answer your question, yes. Pretty interesting story.
This is going to be good
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I got a few good ideas.
Spike is great with massages.
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You would love me to write that wouldn't you?
6103900 Yeabe?
I love gummy. Very much in character.
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Thanks I have no idea where I got that deep thought from, heh weird.
Get her, Spike. Get her.
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He has a chance don't screw it up Spike!
wow
I guess for some people it works that fast, but the romance in this story seems rushed.
Wow Spike doesn´t need long to find someone else, was his new love for coco that strong, that it won over his love for Rarity that fast?
I know what happened in this chapter, and i think some disney movies are doing it like this, but it is weird how fast it happened.
I say this was one of the thing i liked in this episode, the episode wasn´t that great itself, since it was stuffed with to many random stuff, and doesn´t felt like an episode, but even if i like that, i hope this is nothing what is used everytime, i fear that they use it that often, that it isn´t interessting anymore.
, probably one " to many, and i think it it would be better to let Pinkie do other fourth wall stuff, and not the talk to the readers type of things, someone in a different story said it disturbs the flow of the story in a way, and i agree with him a bit.
I really like coco, she was once even one of my favourite Ponys, but i hope you don´t rush it to much.
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Nah it won't happen that fast I'm going to let their relationship grow steadily.
Gummy needs his on spin off I swear.
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That would be a great story to write about!, you gave me an Idea!
the first think i have to do is think of him likea great warrior.......doesn´t work, however, this is a Spike i can like again.
In my opinion a personality like Coco works better for Spike than Rarity, not just in this fanfiction.
I don´t hate him, but i am still not a fan of the show Spike, and because of that everytime he is supposed to be something like awesome, it is difficult to think of him like that. However i think she means his personality in a way.
Nice chapter, sadly a bit short, but i guess we get more this way.
I nearly want to ask why Celestia can feel Spikes pain (a spell?), but i don´t want to disturb the story, it is nothing important.
Not sure how confident your Coco is, but i think i would like it, if he would have to comfort her, maybe if somthing big happens, she can´t solve her personal problem that fast, after all those years with her old boss, it still has to hurt her somehow if someone is shouting at her.
Normally i don´t ask for that, but i guess with Coco it could be a cute moment.
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In the show Spike has a connection with Princess Celestia, as shown that his fire can transport messages specifically to Celestia. I just thought this could be used in a different way. I am outgoing guy and I'm very social so I'm trying my best to portray Coco's character in a believable way as she is basically the opposite of me.
6139484 Well i only wanted to hear a reason, and even if i am not sure if it works like that, i think you can leave it like that, it is okay, the thing with the connection.
About Coco....well till now i like her, at first i thought the romance pacing would be to fast, but it seems you really try to keep it a bit slower.
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This is my second story and I want it to be better than the first, I really want to make their relationship natural and believable. I will not rush this but I won't let it go to slow.
A mother's advice for her dragon son.
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True motherly advice.
6139543 That´s alright, i can tell that you try to make it right, an i guess i would like it to actually have both of them as special someponys, befor the story actually ends.
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Your input means more than you may think, chapter five will be out in a few minutes.
Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wuzzup my Brother!
awwwwwwwwwww
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Was it cute?
6141223 yes
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That was my intent and I really thought it was adorable as well.
Cute but so far my only complaint is that the part of this chapter where Spike learned that Rarity knew he loved her all along felt kinda rushed. Also he rebounded in like half a second.
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You think so? Well I suppose so but is it that cute?
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Check the new chapter out I wrote it just for you, I'm kidding.
hm...
Since I have reason to think that dragons live far longer than ponies do, I imagine that it is impossible for ANY normal mare to meet your requirements... in fact, the only ponies I think COULD fit the bill are Celestia and Luna
but that's kinda far beyond the point, and it's arguing over the specific details of unrealistic, supernatural, and unexplained beings, so I'll just say that it's another good chapter, I can't wait to read more