Delusions

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In response to a prompt by Admiral Biscuit on the Prompt-a-Day group thread.

"Princess Celestia?"
"Yes, Twilight?"
"So... I was a unicorn before my ascension, and Cadence was a pegasus... if you don't mind my asking, what species were you and Princess Luna before you became alicorns?"
"Well, Twilight..."

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Celestias Paladin

Celestias Paladin #1 · Feb 16th, 2015 · · ·

To be honest I was worried when I saw this pop up, the last time I saw a fic that had Celestia being born as a non-pony really didn't take it seriously or something.

This on the other hand was very well done, guess we forget the ponies' cousins. I really enjoyed this, and it is probably one of hte best origin stories I have read. I explains why she is against prejudice, or why she really doesn't like Discord. I do like the part that she still sees herself as a mule, she has stayed true to herself.

Ice Feather

Ice Feather #2 · Feb 16th, 2015 · · ·

I can't stop laughing. Hahaha.

Themaskedferret

Themaskedferret #3 · Feb 17th, 2015 · · ·

Very beautifully done. Bravo.

MrZJunior

MrZJunior #4 · Mar 15th, 2015 · · ·

That was great.

Szalhi

Szalhi #5 · Jan 29th, 2016 · 1 · ·

I came in expecting a gag fic.

I was wrong.

BirdsBooksBrownies

BirdsBooksBrownies #6 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

As someone already mentioned, coming in, I was expecting a silly gag-story. I can happily add this to the list of times I was glad to be wrong. Great job☀🌕🌠❤

Latecomer

Latecomer #7 · May 24th, 2020 · · ·

Well, it could have happened - it's not like we ever found out. It would be interesting to see a mule's reaction.

I'm almost more interested, though, in seeing what would happen if this was published as a short story in Equestria. Especially if the Princesses refused to deny it.

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