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Kodeake


I read. I write. I edit. I Twidash. But above all else, I'm just a regular guy. Shoot me a PM if you have a question.

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I never stopped thinking about you. Not once. Every day, I remembered your voice, your smile, your eyes. And every time it hurt worse than I could have ever imagined. And each day was worse than the last. I love you. More than anything in Equestria. More than flying, more than the Wonderbolts, more than my wings, I love you, Twilight. Goodbye.

- Rainbow Dash

Happy Hearts and Hooves day?

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 23 )

What the fuck. I am literally in the process of writing this story. Well, not exactly, mine's a little longer, and no romance, but still.

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I am in your head, stealing your ideas.

As per the usual with your stories, at least the ones with a sad tag, I find myself teary eyed. Then I read the alternate ending, the one I personally prefer, and I found myself with a goofy smile. Either way, the emotional capabilities of your writing never stop amazing us. Can't wait for more, especially in Missing Dreams department.

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Glad to hear, especially since I'm personally not too big a fan of this one.

As for the MD front.... yeah, stuff happened. I really want to get that ball rolling again as soon as possible, and as soon as I finish my competition I'll get back into it. The next chapter is already almost done.

Amusingly, this story shares a title with one of mine.

The storylines are very different, even if both talk about loss, so I don't care too much.

Only one thing has to be said.

everypony that had been stationed there had never been seen again.

Followed by:

On the eve of Hearts and Hooves day, the war was over and (all) the soldiers could return home to their special someponies in time for the holiday.

Except Twilight's.

Yes, continuity is just like underwears: You don't have to use them, but it's better for everyone if you do.

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Maybe I'm an idiot but I fail to see a continuity error. if you're talking about the fact that I said all the soldiers, then I think it goes without saying that all the soldiers still alive would be coming come. It's pretty obvious that there are going to be casualties in war.

5627612 I'm just saying, it's always good to clarify. If you don't, then there are assholes like me that will call you out on it.

Damn you Kodeake! Now I'm crying.

Very sad, nicely written. Poor Twilight. :fluttercry:

5622683 you don't want my ideas. 98% of them aren't TwiDash.

Woah woah wait, wait a minute*double checks to make sure* OK WHO THE FUCK GAVE THIS A THUMBS DOWN!?! BECAUSE WHOEVER YOU ARE I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND FORCE TWIDASH ONTO YOU UNTIL YOU APOLOGISE AND GIVE THIS A THIMBS UP!!!!!

I though this story was awesome. (I saw one or two grammer mistakes,) but apart from that it was awesome. I liked the sadder end more, for some reason.

WAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!:raritydespair:

When you're gone
Avril Lavigne
I just loved this story.. Omg..:fluttercry:

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I usually down vote tragedy tagged stories. Too much of a bad thing. This is one of the few I liked though. Kodeake really has a way with words. And with Twidash.

Damn it! That line's getting cliché from me... anyways! Why you do this! I just comment on another story and was laughing my head off at the video I linked. Not I'm crying my eyes out!

I like this ending better. It makes me smiles and brings tears of happiness (which is an amazing feat since I don't cry when I'm joyful).

Thank God there's an alternate ending.

I love this story and it reminded me so much of this song

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