Few U-Boat captains were as famous, or as feared, as Otto Kretschmer, nicknamed "Silent Otto." But, when one of the Reich's leading scientist's experiment goes wrong, how did Captain Kretschmer deal with his new surroundings... and the colorful, talking ponies he found there?
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In equestria Otto couldn't have arrived at a better time. for equestria has the possibility of going to war with a new empire over seas. Something Otto has experience in.
THIS ALL TAKES PLACE AFTER THE FIGHT WITH TIREK.
(Also I'll be editing the tags as I go)
(If you see any errors please let me know in the comments)
Chapters (6)
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I was Quite Disappointed Someone missed out on a Opportunity to make a story about this guy.
Well if u need another male oc zone hunter is a military survivalist. Or just a one more male for him to talk to Ether way up to u if u need more information pm me I don't mind just helping out with ideas
Before you all put a bunch of dislikes let me just say that I'm gonna be putting the second chapter out soon.
As for the when this new empire is mentioned it will probably during the second or third chapter
5630320 that's cool dude don't let people but u just started the story just do ur best. And u will have me vote of approval
5630361 thanks dude
5630361 this is actually doing better than I expected, though I'm trying to get some things down before they leave my head and get forgotten forever by me
I suppose you don't have a pre-reader to help with grammar and spelling do you?
5630691 no... i did this all on my own, why? did you find a lot of mistakes?
5630695
Quite a few spelling errors and the story itself needs some work. Along with use of the wrong version of a word such as using ruff when it should be rough.
5630703 oh
5630715
Well, not so much in the way of spelling errors but more so grammatical.
5630740 hmm...... well ill fix as much as i can
HOW ARE PEOPLE READING THE SECOND CHAPTER WHEN I HAVEN'T PUBLISHED IT YET?!?!?!
5630856 2nd chapter. What do you mean people r reading it
5630898 im making the second chapter and it says 10 people have already read it!!!
5630901 NOW 12!!!
5630901 wtf lolz and here I am waiting for it
5630912 oh and just a heads up the 2nd chapter should be out by tomorrow
5630901
Maybe it counts the number of times you look at it as well.
5630916 that's faster than I was thinking it would be
5630920 you might be right
5630922 well im a fast worker.
now it would be tonight but i want to make sure to get as few errors as possible
5630930 well take your time and try to have a little fun
5630971 you know what, my dad read it by mistake and now im extremely embarrassed
5630980
Hahaha there is no need to be people like what they like
5630994 yeah... but this is my dad we're talking about
5631005 one of those dad's lolz I think you ( and ur dad ) will pull through
5631035 my dad is a bit stubborn and not very understanding at times
5631037 that's only because us dads can be protective and stuck in the old ways something he just wants whats best for u.
Dads can have it hard sometimes we worry about r kids
5631066 wait are you a dad?
5631066 also if you stay on a little longer i might have the 2nd chapter done tonight
5631089 hahaha yes brony come in all age these days
5631098 heh
5631099
but don't worry im here because I like to read
5631108 what time is it for you?
5631112
10:36 PM
5631120 i live in berlin germany so its 5:37 in the morning for me
also this is why you might find lots of errors is because im not fluent in english 
5631126 that's fine like all thing it takes practice. by the was I got in to this by reading stories to my little girl off website like this lolz.
PS just remember do your best at every thing you try
5631148 well anyways im getting close to finishing my 2nd chapter. Also, what are your thoughts on me making this an Otto X Trixie Fic
5631126
Also I was thinking you were from some were around here from how u were wording thing
5631165 i use to live in texas but now I've lived in germany for around 2 years.
5631160
It could be rather interesting. The question is what do you really want its ur story I don't mind going back and forth with you on some details but in the end it falls on how you want the story to go and how far you wish to take the relationship between the two
But for the most part I'm for it
5631184 well regardlesss if you had said no to it i was going to do it but i was just asking anyways because well... i love trixie
5631190
Celestia remains me of my wife so I know the feeling
Hahaha
5631207 Is it wrong for a guy to have dirty thoughts towards ponys? even if they are cartoon sentient ponys?
5631218
I believe to each their own. U like what you like. And I see no problem with people being themselves
5631233 i know its wrong but for some reason i cant get to the thoughts out of my head
5631239 how old r u not trying to be creepy