A young and brash griffin goes on a hunting trip to the Everfree. His hatred towards the ponies causes him to attack the vulnerable pony gathering herbs. He did not think of the consequences of his actions, and he paid dearly for them.
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the Hellsing brony
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Discord is OOC, griffin is an idiot for no discernible reason, descriptions are lacking, 3edgy5me, story basically makes very little sense.
5618781 I expected that much. I'm not very good, but I felt the need to try .
I actually thought this story was great! The grammar isn't, yknow, perfect, but it's still cool!
5619264 Thanks friend! I'm not the best at grammar, but thanks for the feedback.
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You're more than welcome.
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Oh sweet jesus it's you.
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You again...
‘Fucking ponies, what gives them the right to feel superior to the griffons? We are born predators, made for hunting and killing. When did we let weak prey like the ponies tell us what we can and cannot do? Bah, the elders became weak and fell prey to the devious tongues of that goddamn princess.’ My stomach growled with hunger, reigning my mind in from my personal tirade. I checked my rucksack for any dried meat or bread, none whatsoever.
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This is true.
I know the story this is in response to. and I can say this is worse than the story you parody. Adding in discord in order to "Save" fluttershy is an insult to her character. she is perfectly capable of handling herself in the wild.
6173464 shitty characterization, I realize that. I'm somewhat surprised over the amount of likes from the initial response. i had an idea, threw it together, it's edgy, ooc and rather terrible
Wow, that wasn't what I was expecting, it was even better! Just because it has a gore tag, doesn't mean crap. I'm talking to all the trolls out there.
The death was a bit unexpected but I loved that this gryphon got what he asked for! Mess with Fluttershy and her friends will cut you
Well, the first stories are rarely the best ones but I liked it. I could need some rewriting and grammar checking but otherwise it's a pleasing short story. I've always prefered Discord in OOC. All characters actually. Or a bit at least. It proves that you're a braver fanfic writer. At least in my opinion. Because you brave yourself to do something different and fresh. Sometimes it works and sometimes it fails. You just have to experiment untill you find a good balance. C:
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There is nothing more dangerous than one with many friends.
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