When a book of dark magic formerly belonging to King Sombra is stolen by a mysterious masked pony, Sunset Shimmer and Echo Alchemy team up to retrieve it. Their mission leads them to intrigue, treachery, and much more...
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did sterling will help them?
Link lost the majoras mask
It starts
Cadence is right that Shining should have handled that without threats or confrontation.
Thank you Murray Napoleon for dealing with such rotten law-enforcers.
I love you had that Sherlock Holmes part
Elementary my dear Sunset
That was a greed spell, right? If there was a rage spell and a greed spell, so there has to be a spell for the others deadly sins, right?
Zhadnost was behaving just like King Midas.
5693580 Oh, yes.
Uroho reminded me of that fat mayor from Cloudy With a Chance of Meatballs.
UUUHHHH, i guess i already know the bad guy here
5704820 So right.
that was one crazy chapter, but, pretty good as well
There are three sins remaining: envy, sloth and pride. Which them will be the next?
5717321 Pride. But it won't be in the next chapter. There'll be a little break from the sins coming up next.
Now the only ones left are Pride, Sloth, and Envy.
5717822
What kind of break. It will be about Shining Armor or about Echo and Sunset's feelings towards each other? Maybe the mysterious masked pony.
5718047 Not to give too much away, but there will still be a page involved. But instead of a psychotic corrupted pony, the trio will face a different kind of obstacle to retrieve it.
Thank goodness that Shining's no longer pursuing them anymore.
Do you know what the spell remembered me? The first circle of Hell from the epic poem Divine Comedy of Dante, where the souls from unbaptized and virtuous pagans are surrounded by darkness where no one can see through. Was it from here you get the idea for this chapter?
5733504 Not exactly. Darkness that can't be penetrated by light just seemed like a very "dark magic" kind of spell.
5733537
I see. Sorry.
Sunset truly should not have been so hard on Echo after he apologized for the things the Pride spell forced him to state.
Monter Echo wil return
The last sin that's missing is envy. I think I can imagine what will happen.
OH boy i don't like the sound of that
God damnit Cadance, better put some sense in the head fo your husband
Shining has become a complete jackass! Seriously, give Echo a chance, dude!
5777495 I'm sure that his wife will persuade him before this is over.
5778141 Let's hope so
I THINK I ALREADY KNOW HO IS THE MASKESD PONY
5791695 Then you are better at this than me, because I don't have a clue.
You know, there are two things I'm joyous about in reading this chapter: that Sterling and Echo have come to know each other as good friends and that Echo and Sunset have become a loving couple.
I wonder what sterling is up to
I still think Shining Armor's still misguided about Echo Alchemy, especially since Sunset now knows how well she relates to him and that they both love each other as well. Perhaps Cadence will convince her husband of that after all of this is over.
5803901 Who cares? Shining is the biggest of Jackasses i've ever seen
5804680 At least we now know that Sterling isn't the pony beneath the mask.
5804680
5804695 yeah, but i was shocked to find out that Echo had a twin brother
5804750 Me too.
You know, I'd imagine that Twilight is going to have an extremely long lecture with her elder brother about treating ponies like Echo with respect.
Cadnce can you please slap your husband for him Swallow his Pride?
5814776 5815877 I agree with both of you.
5815877 I don't think she's that kind of mare, sir.
Echo can not be Dead!
Oh of course he is not dead
You know, I'm glad to see that Shining Armor now has respect for Echo Alchemy instead of contempt.
5830876 That's what I'm thinking too. Also, it's good to see that Shining Armor is no longer regarding Echo Alchemy with contempt.
While I'm shocked that Sterling Cross had betrayed everyone, I'm also glad that Shining Armor has finally come to fully apologizing to Echo.
So, Sterling's plan worked after all
I KNOW IT THAT STERLING WAS A TRAITOR
Its gonna have another chapter?