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KidatHeart5


I'm a writer, artist, and animation buff. I'm hoping to make my mark in the world by doing what I love most. My favorite characters are Discord, Luna, and Twilight Sparkle.

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This is my spin that was inspired by the Hub promo for Villaintine's Day and the film "Maleficent". Discord has lived happily in the Everfree Forest until an unforeseen event robs him of his teleportation and most of his flight . As an act of vengeance, he curses the newborn filly Twilight Sparkle to eternal sleep. Discord soon regrets this and tries to save her from her fate.
Cover art is by the glamorous ChaosQueen! I am forever grateful.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 67 )

Fluttershy better not be evil. :flutterrage: Don't be evil, Fluttershy!! :fluttershbad:

5608347 Read on. You'll be surprised.:raritywink:

Cadance smiled uneasily, “That’s a very nice gift.” But Discord held out a finger and said, “Bup, bup, bup! I wasn’t finished yet.” He faced himself toward the crowd and hands began to glow with a sickly yellow. He continued, “But…before the sun sets on her sixteenth birthday, she will prick her hoof on the spindle of a spinning wheel and fall into a sleep-like sleep!”

Either a death-like sleep or a sleep-like death :twilightsmile:

5608361 I've never hated Shining Armor so much in my life before.:flutterrage::yay:

Discord burst from the brush and asked alarmingly, “What is it, my dear? Are you hurt? Has there been a fire? Are there thieves about? Let me at them!”

:rainbowlaugh:

...no. Not evil Fluttershy! Fluttercord is the OTP!!!

*phew* Okay, Fluttershy isn't evil! Good!

So...Spike equals Owlowicious? MIND FREAK! :applejackconfused: :rainbowlaugh:

MYSTERY VILLAIN NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

...this is so much better than the actual Maleficent movie. *dodges angry complaints* I'm sorry! I found Maleficent to be adorably bad!!! I can't help it!!

5608403 In the newest "Maleficent" movie, it's actually quoted as "a sleep-like death," but that trailer with Discord and Twilight was just that. Which is nonetheless weirdly worded, but still proper based on the actual reference.

5608403 LOL!
I think it was sleep-like death? Or death-like sleep?

5622318 In the trailer for Villaintine's Day, it was "sleep like sleep". However, in the movie, it was "sleep like death". I went with Hasbro on this one.

5622545 I haven't seen the trailer for Villaintine's Day!

5624543 Look on YouTube and type in "My Little Pony Maleficent Trailer". It's the one with Discord and Twilight. If you love the film, you'll definitely love this spoof!

yes should Chrysalis be adopted

Born into. Then a freakish accident that had something to do with Discord.

Born into... This would give the whole story a bit of a twist (:twistnerd: had to put Twist in) in knowing that Cadence was actually truly related Chrysallis, so then Twilight is related to her also. :twilightoops: I don't know why, but this would make the story more interesting for me. :rainbowderp:

5639317 And you will get more Fluttercord soon.:raritywink:

If your looking for cover art for your story I would love to draw a picture for it. :twilightsmile: Just give me an idea of what you would like.

1st: Fluttercord. :yay: "Yay" 2nd: Fluttershy is not Evil. She can't be... Please say she's not. :fluttershysad:

5645579 I'll send you a draft within a day or two of what I would like and you can take it from there. You're welcome to improve on the cover art if you like. Thanks for offering!

5645646 She's not. I'll edit my author's notes to clarify this so there won't be any misunderstanding.

King Sombra: "Your fight is futile, Discord. You can't possibly win!" Me: well guess what King Sombra you lost this battle. not so high and mighty now are you? :ajsmug:

I knew Fluttershy couldn't be evil :yay: "Yay"

:fluttershysad: Why do I get the feeling we're getting closer to the end? I mean obviously it can't be because they haven't found Flutttershy yet. I'd like a little more Fluttercord before the story is over. :fluttercry:

5675179 And you will, I can assure you. :raritywink:

5690573 It is so gorgeous! :pinkiehappy: Thank you so much! I absolutely love the border! It is a nice addition! :twilightsmile:

5693868 Happy that you like it. :twilightsmile:

Good shes not evil....I like this so far

wait can't he grow them back xD

I love how you had Discord break the fourth wall. I hated how the king died in the movie. Maleficent wouldn't have let that happen. Having Discord change that was a wonderful touch!

YAY!! Another chapter! I loved it too! And I'm glad you had Fluttershy and Discord in a relationship! I ship them so hard:heart:

Discord: "What? You didn't think I was going to let her die, did you? Oh, no. Something much worse."

Question: What's so bad about being shipped of to the Appaloosan Mountains?

5779326 Beyond there are the Badlands.

5786522 Oh yeah… that does sound bad~hehe

I really think that
1) Fluttershy should've been swapped with Celestia, and
2) Twilight should've been swapped with Fluttershy.
Don't get me wrong: I like this story, but the casting could've fit the cannon better and that's always a good thing. I have nothing against the Fluttercord in this - I actually love it - but I can never see Twilight 'stealing the rest of Discord's broken heart' and not Fluttershy. Also, Celestia is an alicorn and she would've visited less and less as she grew older because of the responsibility she held by being a Princess.
I'm not hating on this story. This is a good take on Disney's 'Maleficent.'

6108305 I will post the ending soon enough.

I never liked that movie, let's see if this fairs any better.

Let's just say that everything I was afraid would happen, happened.

When's the final chapter!

6172498 My writing mojo on this story's a little wonky, so forgive me for making you wait.:twilightoops:

Please tell me the next chapter is coming soon:fluttercry:

I tried verry hard not to ask this but... when is the next chapter going to come out? I want to see what happens next! :twilightoops: I

YAYY!! IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!1

6405467 Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

Yay! Final chapter.... wait... aww manits over :fluttershysad: Oh well, all great fics must come to an end.

:heart::heart::heart: i loved it..this is to sweet...totally worth the wait

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