It's been a long while, but the adorably tall unicorn has finally done it! Limit State has made it to on-site safety inspector. If the foremare does well, she can probably end up find herself that stallion of her dreams. Then again, life has an odd way of working things out. How tough is the unicorn engineer?
Cover art by: Jargon Scott
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Limit State is not for feels
On a more serious note, your writing is good, but you dialogue could be more... Dialogue-ish. As in, nobody, and no pony for that matter, speaks perfect English.
Maybe you can do a sequel where she finds her special somepony.