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Still a game.

Twilight organizes a game full of... Imagination! Which turns out to be the worst day ever (especially for Rainbow Dash.)

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mehperson

mehperson #1 · Feb 12th, 2015 · · ·

It's a fun story ( reminds of the time me and my friends played tabletop RPGs he he). Nostalgia aside, it's a fun little story that is just not well-edited. Not saying that it isn't funny (believe me, it is) but my grammar Nazi side can't help itself. A LOT of grammar mistakes. I give it a 6.5-7/10. Would have been 7.6-8+/10 if well-edited. I shall now wait for the next chapter.

LunarLove

LunarLove #2 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · ·

The ending was amazing and the story was a great topic itself. Keep writing great stories

Appl3dashie

Appl3dashie #3 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · ·

5619461 Thanks so much! Your awesome!
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Okay it was really rushed but thanks! Can you list some errors? But still I'll fix it up tonight!
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