It's a normal day at Sweet Apple Acers, Granny is baking, Mac and Pa is out bucking, Ma and Applejack is reading. But as soon as night fall the little fritter thief will strike, stealing fritters. But this time, will the thief will be caught?
- a test story, I wrote it on my pc to see how much better I have become.... the grammar is still the same.... comment if you think this is better than my first story
What TheFishyNach0 said. You have some good ideas, but you do need an editor, and a good editor who will also help push you to be a better writer. I say go to some of the groups like Looking For Editors to see who you can get.
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I know, it is just a test. A test to see how I have grown since my first story.