Jet Braveheart is a 15 year old human boy who has nobody to go to. He crash lands in a clearing in the Everfree forest by total accident. He later meets the Mane 6. Is this the day things will change for this boy?
Jet Braveheart is a 15 year old human boy who has nobody to go to. He crash lands in a clearing in the Everfree forest by total accident. He later meets the Mane 6. Is this the day things will change for this boy?
story seems good so far. but he doesn't always have to say that he's 15 1/2 years old all the time, he could just say 15.
have a thumb and a fav.
The Rainbow Factory? Oh dear... anyways nice story, I see it's Sci-Fi ish but I like it, hope to see more and keep up the good work!
552067 Thanks for the feedback! This is my first time doing something like this so I took your advice.
551249 Thank you!
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Yer welcome buddy!
Yay but if I was him I would panic,though I don't know his experience with Aliens so you might want give him some back story
Dude this is the best HiE story ive ever seen
715829 Thanks! That means a lot to me. I finally have time to keep writing this story so I hope I meet your expectations!
I like your story very much. All of the stories that I have read were pretty cool. It is amazing what you people can come up with. If you would like to talk to me a little more, please feel free to email me at rainerobinson@ymail.com
i like this story, you earned a like and fav, keep making more please.
Interesting...
It seems rushed other then that its pretty good, just keep writing you'll get better. At least thats what they tell me.
Keep up the good work, and good luck!