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JetBraveheart


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Jet Braveheart is a 15 year old human boy who has nobody to go to. He crash lands in a clearing in the Everfree forest by total accident. He later meets the Mane 6. Is this the day things will change for this boy?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

story seems good so far. but he doesn't always have to say that he's 15 1/2 years old all the time, he could just say 15.
have a thumb and a fav.

The Rainbow Factory? :raritydespair: Oh dear... anyways nice story, I see it's Sci-Fi ish but I like it, hope to see more and keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

552067 Thanks for the feedback! This is my first time doing something like this so I took your advice. :pinkiehappy:

Yay but if I was him I would panic,though I don't know his experience with Aliens so you might want give him some back story

Dude this is the best HiE story ive ever seen

715829 Thanks! That means a lot to me. I finally have time to keep writing this story so I hope I meet your expectations! :twilightsmile:

I like your story very much. All of the stories that I have read were pretty cool. It is amazing what you people can come up with. If you would like to talk to me a little more, please feel free to email me at rainerobinson@ymail.com

i like this story, you earned a like and fav, keep making more please.:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

Interesting...
It seems rushed other then that its pretty good, just keep writing you'll get better. :pinkiehappy: At least thats what they tell me.
Keep up the good work, and good luck!

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