Adagio, Aria, and Sonata aren't exactly friends, but when their pendants get shattered, they find themselves in bully radar, being the focus of cruel cliques, and being whispered about all over school. Aria doesn't really care, and she decides to strike out alone for a week. That week, she finds out who she was meant to be.
Cute so far. Definitely would like to read more longer chapters.
I also hope Flash gets hurt. I love it when he does
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Thanks so much! And yes something will happen to Flash >:3
Oh Sonata, may thee, like Pinkie, never change
As for my main criticism, the chapters need to be flushed out more so the reader develops a bond with Aria. Yes, there are OK character interactions, but there isn't much that stems from that. We need to see more of Aria's feelings in order to connect with her.
Even so, have a bad ass Aria making metal her bitch
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Okay then! So longer chapters and more interactions. Ok!
Good. Good. But doesn't Aria seem too nice? Hmm. Interesting.
I see. Going more the cartoony way. Yet with subtle hints of adult themes here and there.
I like it. This has been sitting in my read later pile forever, but I like it. Keep going!
Never liked Flash anyway.
Evil Sonata. Heeheee. I'm going to enjoy this very, very much.