Written from the perspective of Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow Dash finds herself having weird and sudden feelngs for Applejack that she just can't explain. Never before has she felt this was about another female... It's driving her crazy. All the weird looks, competitions and unexplained language. Could Applejack really be into her?
They're sick and tiered of fighting each other: the screaming, the fighting and calling ach other but if Rainbow can't have her then nobody can.
... Please pick up the phone...
Chapters (2)
Will u write more soon and if so when
I only have one thing to say.
If you have to say it, then it's most likely not worth the read.Just make sure not to forget.5600519 I didn't have to. I chose to.
5603493 So it's an artistic decision... May I ask why?
5603620 Without trying to make it sound terribly worse- which inevitably I will, I am a professional at it.- for myself so I don't forget, and just to get myself going which I usually do in my description. I mostly write for myself and it's just nice when others enjoy it :3
5603635 Oh. Okay then.
5603635 While I'm at it, if you need an editor, you can ask away.
5603661 Oh, that's... Nice?
A professional writer would know the difference between "tired" and "tiered".
I loved this story
5605899 I said I'm professional at making things worse... You should probably read my comment before coming up with snide comments...
5606495
I did read it; it was poorly written and thus difficult to understand.
I suspect the same is true of your story.
5611460 there's nothing wrong with lesbianism...
5628621 get the fuck off my story.
5628621 its a god damn story you twisted ass, if you don't like it, don't read it!! Don't waste my time with your bullshit about lesbians because its not making the characters do anything. They are fictional. This is fiction. Aka not real. I am a lesbian and its offensive that you would say there's something wrong with it you dickhead.
5734269 I didn't thinka nyone was gonna stick up for me, thanks bro
so...yeah, im kinda late...and the something went down in the comments, and I'm most likely sure Whatever Westdog put was disredpectful, and Im totally on ur side Feather_Quill...
but um...is this story going to continue, because I really like it.
Thats it, have a nice day!
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new chapter please
Omg, I LOVE this story!!
its so Sad that you probably never gonna finish it, sens there was such a long time Aho you worked in it.. 
That's bringing tears to my eyes I hope they can make up and get together cause I ship appledash