Within the walls of Stable Eighty Eight, a new kind of war has been fought. A kind of war the likes of which have never been seen within the magical land of Equestria. A class war.
Well, not a bad concept... was the setting going to remain in the stable or are you planing some Wasteland fun. While doing so would follow the formula it kind of takes away from the uniqueness of the story. I really can't see the wasteland being that much of a cultural shock compared to the stable to warrant the change in setting. As such I look forward to seeing more of a change in dynamic between the main charecters, regardless of the setting.
Also you might want to consider redoing the Charecter Sheets. If I were on my PC it wouldn't be too bad as I could easily change the zoom, but for people who are reading it on a mobile device the justification is out of sync. You might also want to consider putting it in the A/N, this is just a preferences opinion as its not entirely relevant to the story.
Well, not a bad concept... was the setting going to remain in the stable or are you planing some Wasteland fun. While doing so would follow the formula it kind of takes away from the uniqueness of the story. I really can't see the wasteland being that much of a cultural shock compared to the stable to warrant the change in setting. As such I look forward to seeing more of a change in dynamic between the main charecters, regardless of the setting.
Also you might want to consider redoing the Charecter Sheets. If I were on my PC it wouldn't be too bad as I could easily change the zoom, but for people who are reading it on a mobile device the justification is out of sync. You might also want to consider putting it in the A/N, this is just a preferences opinion as its not entirely relevant to the story.
5767855 I had a feeling it wouldn't translate over well to phones. I'll see what I can do about it. And yes, they are going to the wasteland.
Brony on!