The Crimson Fence

A sequel to The Little Red Colt, another story of mine. After twenty-something years, Big Macintosh's father has come home, and Big Mac wants nothing more than to the teach the monster that is his pa a few manners.

But who's the real monster?

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DJ DASH3R

DJ DASH3R #1 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

Wow.
That's.....sad? I can't really tell. It's sad that his pa ran off on him and AJ. It's sad that he knows his pa raped granny. But is it sad that Big Mac killed him? I don't know. For what his pa did he should of suffered. At least that's what I think. But was it worth killing him? Can't say.

Satin

Satin #2 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

Mother-bucking justice, sorry I missed the big picture. Happy to see someone awful get their comeuppance. Anyway, good stuff here.

you got yourself a like from me

Diabolic Gnome

Diabolic Gnome #3 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

MY GOD

Strudel knew he was going to die so he went back to the farm knowing what big mac would do

The last and greatest act of defiance.

BR #4 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

Damn. Forgot to read the first one.

nonameguy0010

nonameguy0010 #5 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

Oh wow. This was a good summary to the last story. I'm sure he will work this out with his sisters later, so to hell with them for now. Keep up the great writing, also I can't wait for the next 'The Dead City' installment.
Big Mac is best stallion.