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"You've got a real problem all right, and a banjo is the only answer."

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Definitely decent; at least not subpar in comparison to other novice authors' works.

Though, I highly suggest getting a pre-reader, otherwise... this type of thing tends to occur:

"What about completing an ancient spell, not to mentian being the most powerful unicorn in existence!" Twilight cried, wondering if her friend had forgotten about the whole mixed-up cutie marks situation.

Nice work. Nice work. Interesting premise. Characterization accurate. Would've done much better if it had more to it.

That... Makes sense. Nice job!

That was completely stupid.

In the best of ways.

I laughed.

Good job.

Lol :rainbowlaugh:

I give you :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:/5 dashes

Short, simple, hilarious! I heard the entire exchange in my head, it was spot on. :rainbowlaugh: And Twi's just flabbergasted...

"A pifany!" Dash exclaimed. "Y'know, a breakthrough!"
"You mean an epiphany?" The alicorn asked, a pained expression on her face.
"Um, that's what I just said! A pifany."

I laughed harder then I should have, hehehe.

Nice job!
Hehehe, she'll be a good princess... maybe 8D

I'm late ( AGAIN :rainbowlaugh: ) and this is just awesome XD! I couldn't stop laughing for, like , ten minutes. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowhuh:it's a pifany!
:pinkiehappy:YEAH PIFANYS!
You mean an epiphany?:facehoof:
No we mean pifany!:::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiecrazy:
Are you sure?:duck:
Yepper doodle dooder!:applejackconfused:
Okay then...:fluttershysad:

I Mean Technically speaking Rainbow Dash performing her first Sonic Rainboom is much more important to the safety of equestrian than most of twilights Accomplishments. Especially since twilight is just a conduit. She maybe a skilled mage, but as far as harmony goes she is just focusing her friends powers through herself.

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