A mysterious pony wakes up in an even weirder location with no memory. With the help of a certain purple unicorn, he tries to unravel his unclear past, but as he starts to remember he begins to understand that not everything about his past is pleasant. Or could it be just a mirage created by the chaos within him?
This is my first ever fic (or fic-chapter, if you want), so if anyone actually reads this far: any advice, criticism or comments of any kind are appreciated!
Also: English isn't my native language, so if you see any spelling- and/or grammar-errors, please notify me, and I'll fix it!
Also (again): I'm not sure of how often I'll update this story. It all depends on my mood, school, location, ideas, etc. but hopefully... Maybe a chapter a week?
Have an idea I should use? Post them in the comments!
Thanks!
So far it seems damn good, just please update it regularly.
554160 Thanks! I'll try, but I won't rush it too much (Just to make sure it won't turn out bad.).
Chapter 2... Soon... Within the 2 next days. Most likely tomorrow.
Also: With 20% more chaos-related stuff.
The second chapter is here... Took longer than expected because of school, mood and ideas... Basically what I said in the first chapters comments.
Anyways, if you like it, then that's great!
But if you don't like it: Why? What can/should I change in upcoming chapters?