My name's PJ. I'm from New York. I write pony fics. I go to parties with bronies. I'm not good at self-introduction.
"Greetings, love-snacks, it's your old pal the Chrys-keeper!"
Queen Chrysalis recalls for you a tale of two changelings who think that going to Earth will be an easy way to feed. Also serves as a responsefic to Feeding The Demons or: How You Fools Have Doomed Us All
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Already got one downvote from a trollfag
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That was pun-ishing to read.
JK, very entertaining, good style. Just so many puns. It burns.
Pretty good. Make sure to make it clear who is talking. There are times you go 3-4 lines without indicating a character. But hey, you have a lot more stories and viewership, so do whatever.
Pretty funny, I hate my cats even more now.
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Thank you. Truth be told, I don't mind downvotes. If someone doesn't like something I write, I'd rather have that than not caring.
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I'll try to watch that in the future. I always attribute when I have more than two characters in a conversation, but when I had the two changelings before they got their names, I was a little stuck.
Hello everyone from FIMFiction. I'd would like say that i'm a bit new here and enjoying reading people's fan fictons. But that's the problem, i dont really know how to actually post a fan fiction.
So it would be REALLY helpful if someone were to tell me how to and thanks for your time. 
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Hi DJ! If you go to the main page you should see a button with your name on it. If you mouse over that there's a link to "Stories." Click that and you should have another button for "New Story." There's also a FAQ linked to in the bar in the main page. If that doesn't work, try going to the chatroom and asking for help there.
I think you'll find posting really easy. Writing, that's the hard part.
547797 yea, but when there's one guy going around downvoting everything just to be a jerk.....
Oh wait, you wrote derpys human!
I love that!
Holy crap that was freaking hilarious! Exactly like the Crypt Keeper from Tales from the Crypt, with some hilariously set up puns, this should be its own web series dude.
First, am I not?
Anyway, I like this fic.
Good stuff, like I said before, it should be its own animation.
My body broke into a cold sweat when I read the title and description.
AWESOME! The cat is right. I have a cat. Uhh.... Maybe the lodestone I am holding is a changeling?! No, wait, it's magnetic.
You predicted your own downvotes! WOW!
That was 10000 times as much as thought I would like it.
I finally got around to reading the second chapter. Though I don't believe I've ever seen Tales from the Crypt, I feel like this is a well written parody. And the puns. Oh, Sweet Celestia, the puns. You even have a pun in the title. As an afterthought, Do you think we'll see Nightmare Moon make an appearence as a guest host?
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Like I said, I'm not sure I'll revisit this. . . I have a couple of other fanfic ideas kicking around. If I do, who knows?
Cats, huh? Now i know why I didn't get a new one after Arthur died. Dogs rule.
Yeah, I can understand the craving for attention.
Too bad I lack the shape-shifting ability. I'd abuse that ability so bad....
They were lucky in not encountering our darker side.
I wonder what hate does to them?
Permission to open the Floodgates sir?
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Of laughter or tears?
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Either one, tears preferably.
669319 This.
Work in some Python refs next chapter.
Hey! No more? We want more! Let's set up a strike.. Wait.. on what?
Woah! Did not notice this.
Ooh twisty twisted curse indeed!
Keep going! ;)
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*searches for a story titled "Queen Chrysalis Made Me Write This"*
Hey, just stopping by to upvote after reading. Sad to hear Feeding the Demons got removed. Not sure what did it, unless the author really t'd off the mods here. Either way, I found it on Fimfetch. Maybe someone can reupload it.