I had been at this party, or masquerade. I loved every minute of it. Dressed up as Pinkamena Diana Pie, or Pinkie Pie as she commonly calls herself. She is a blast, a riot, and a disaster waiting to happen.
I had chosen her and the suit, just for the love of her, pink and the antics, she is the perfect character to be, at any party, isn’t she? She was, but she apparently carried a few consequences with her. She refused to just leave the party behind, that’s where I ended up.
Actually, the consequences hit me, the next full moon, like every WereWolf curse in history, from every known history, to be exact.
So, the night before the full moon, there she is. I am her, ready for the next party.
Chapters (3)
5570599 That is the reaon I should need, in order to report you, right of the very same bat.
Never click a story you don't even agree with the tags.
I actually enjoy this premise, I'd like to see where it goes.
5570835 That is what I had thought.
Which is why I published the story in the first place.
Now I just have to explore where she is going and write the comming chapters.
5570599 There's plenty of reasons why this story looks bad, but I think you're focusing on the wrong ones
5571856 At least, there is reason.
If you would be cind enough to point out, what bothers you?
There is always the chance it may save theexperience for the next reader?
Personally I like this idea as I have seen it on deviantart done very well but that's not why I like it I like it because your one of the only fimfiction writers, heck writers in general thats I've seen use this idea, I think more people should do this idea and dive into it just as boldly if people did this their would be more weird but very interesting and exciting Ideas and stories such as this.
Something confusing though is that is she turning into pinkie pie after taking off the suitror turning into her with it on or what because the story does not specify, and perhaps someone should make visuals for this just to see what they look like I'd do it but I can't make art.
5576033 I guess you could find most everything on DeveiantArt? Hopefully even done well.
If I got this right, they even have an entire group that migrated there as thier site couldn't hold the air in her balloon anymore, the suittransformation and curse was one section at that site.
Going boldly would be one of the things I can do,I love exploring the posibilities and options, from the core to the outer reaches.
A graphical illustration could make things come to life in a very different way, even to those who are not the best at seeing a written story coming to life.
5576083 Confusing?
I guess I failed to see an issue like that, most likely because I was writing the story in the first place.
Or is the title also confusing the story?
The idea is that she is inspecting the suit, in order to see that it is still where she left it.
She put it back in the box before she went out.
Ahhh, the title isn't confusing at all it's corny if anything, and I think art of it would be nice with those who aren't always able to imagine what something is even if it is described to them, I sometime ( emphasis on sometimes) have that issue. And when you say it could come to life in a very different way do you mean in a good or bad way since your statement is a two way street. Also I didn't find this exactly on Deviantart just similar things I think you're the only one to come up with this specific idea at all
5577431 Corny, *giggles*, I guess that still would be better than confusing, right?
Kind of a Ponyfied version of the old mythic tail, I think
I guess there are two parts in the failure, just a matter of which is the dominant at any given time. If it is more on the writers or the readers side would depend on the story and the reader?
I guess it would depend on, in which of your shoes you are standing as I said it.
For convenience, I hope you are standing on the right and possitive shoe right now,
as opposed to the left and scared or depressing shoe.
I don't know if all would be excited to see the girl turning into the pink mare named Pinkie, in a City anywhere near them. Depends on from which side you laced your shoes, in order to tie back to this expression.
Would you like for a story to come to life in a more real fashion?
Just imagine this suit was actually available in your city, or community?
Pinkie Pie loose on the ciy for three full moon nights in a stretch?
Ow, I guess I should have figured. I like to go out on a limb with things.
Pull you in the less expected direction, and have you where you were never expecting, even with hat on the surface may seem like a tried and true idea?
Hey you're the author lead the way and I'll follow personally I turn off moral compass in these stories to see where it leads and how the story go since its a story that could have people supporting both sides plus no matter how the story starts is not important it's where it goes will good or bad things happen from here and at the end and what is good and bad to what, who, how, and why is it like that.
I hope I'm not frightening you.
Sorry my dad is nagging at me, talk to you tomorrow.
5577512 Ah, yeah. I guess I am the author.
Wow, you just deactivate the compas, just like that. Just like that?
Even if I guess it could help you enjoy a few good stories, when they are good, because they take the other way?
That is the way of tossing a coin, there are two equally looking sides of your every coin.
Even if most coins does have a third side coin flippers commonly seems to ignore.
WWW, as in What, Who and hoW, or the Where?
5577514 Frightened?
5577568 Uh, ok. I guess I just see you by tomorrow.
Even if the next chapter will take much more then onemore day to be published.
I meant we could still talk later. Talk to you later (ttyl).
5579162 sure, I don't mind sTalking (to) you later.
Guess I will just be here for when you have the time. By then, there is always the chance you have a new chapter to read, too.
Neat.
Sorry for lack of conversation I'll try to talk to you tommorow if you want.
5579180 Thanks.
5585387 I'll just see you, when you have the time.
There are tons of places to incert your comments, though.
I know it didn't get a good voting record, but I'd like to read more of this if you plan on continuing the story.
A first person point of view of becoming Pinkie Pie is a scary yet intriguing concept, especially if it is a 'curse' (really it sounds to me like those stories of a split personality taking over at a certain time of the day, except there is no split personality; the narrator is just enhanced into Party Pony mode).
Really the only thing that I can think of that came close was Why Am I Pinkie Pie?!
5638800 That is among my problems, some of my stories doesn't get a very bad voting record.
If only people could read the story and try to point out what bothered them, before they vote?
Seems I have a few fairly loyal fans, just not enough to carry me over the group of troubles.
If only I knew how to carry the stories to the once who are actually interested?
I started on the second episode and haven't marked it as either Complete or On Hiatus yet.
From the time since I published the previous chapter, it seems to be high time to push this story one step further.
My stories are commonly First Person.
It would be a curse, if it was against your will.
Yet, I guess I could see a special thrill in the process, if you enjoy the nights.
If the changes comes as an Enhancement, then it is more of a Blessing. Even if it only lasts for the few nights each moon.
I guess the Title does summon things up fairly well, even if we know the answer.
You were dressing up as her in that last Masquerade, but apparently, this is a cursed suit.
Thanks for the second chapter. Always fun to read Pinkie Pie from a first pony perspective. I have to wonder if this full moon episode is just setting up the necessary stuff for the next one; perpetual parties every full moon. How will Hitomi take it, and how much she remembers of it.
5726572 Then I need to complete the next chapter soon as well.
I have numerous stories about Pinkie Pie in first Person. She is all over the place in my collection. sometimes, there is even Two or tree of her in the same story. Not that Canon has Two separate Pinkie Pie, aside from her Clones. I have all the Common Tagable variants of her, so that should be no Problem either?
The story is partially based on the common WereWolf Curse. A few things doesn't follow the original concepts, though.
If and how much she will remember is left open, for now. Monthly Pink Parties sounds like too much of a Dream?
Oh, but wait. I have more stories where pinkie pie sets up her Parties. On the other Hoof, it is part of her Job to throw Parties, isn't it?
Beggs the Question, does she have to be physically present at each and every local where her Parties are currently in the Swing?