• Member Since 3rd Apr, 2014
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Gonzo250


Not a 'brony'. Here for smut and lulz.

Comments ( 14 )

your cover image just screams 'MERICA

...'cept it's a Land Rover. Which is English. And said picture was taken on a farm, in England. =p

5685950 #BeingBritishLikeABoss :rainbowlaugh:

Nothing winds me up more than people pulling a 'custom' car or bike out of their arse that defies all levels of logic and physics.

Whoops...

...My bad. :twilightsheepish:

5686770 we discussed this. I fixed it for you. =p

There's potential here, but it needs polishing.
No vote in either direction from me.

5688616 I'll be honest, the rough-and-ready feel is partly intentional, and partly due to years of inactivity when it comes to creative writing.


Also, I'm common as muck, which helps little. =p

I really don't understand all the down votes, this story is amazing and well written. I love it!

5749693

That's awfully kind of you to say so.

Personally, I feel I could have done better, possibly gone into a little more depth on a few issues etc. etc.

Bit difficult to properly empathise what people/ponies may or may not take issue with as I'm generally very laid-back and blasé, taking most things on the chin, as it were.

I do change my mind about what I said earlier, the characters aren't as well-written as I firs thought, but it's a lot of fun anyway!

While I am scared you might, because of what just happened, write clop; I am, maybe because of the way you write, not completely turned of (and I don't mean sexually).

I had a hard time quieting from my fits of laughs growing louder the farther I read.

5861603 I didn't think they were to be fair. I need to watch more episodes, get a better idea of the character personalities. So far, I've watched 3 episodes in total... To that end, please bear with me, they will get better.

Clop: No. Not directly in the story, anywho. I will more than likely (as so many others do) put the clop scenes in a separate story, or keep them in their own chapters so people can skip them entirely without missing important parts of the story as a whole.

Also, I am glad I amused you. The main premise of this story is, indeed, to amuse. If clop happens, as said, it'll be set up so it can be avoided if you so choose.

Up in smoke, that's where my money goes
In my lungs and sometimes up my nose
When troubled times begin to bother me
I take a toke and all my cares go up in smoke

Dumb as shit, but I'm liking it.

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