• Published 13th Jun 2015
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Scourge Of The Caribou - Jack of Tales

Comments ( 4 )

Several errors but still a good chapter.

At this point, I'd swap out 'several' with 'numerous.'
At the very least I could decode the meaning.
The introduction to the rebel leaders was funny; good new' fashion magical teleport illness always hits hard! :pinkiesick:

Please don't stay on hiatus for too long, as most people who do never come back to finish their story.

Can’t wait to see the next chapter

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