A Dragon type's aventures

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Blue Star Dust

Blue Star Dust #1 · Feb 8th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 - Everfree forest hunt (contain gore) ·

Why i wrote this? i dont even know, and is not that good ;3

zeldawolffang

zeldawolffang #2 · Feb 8th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 - Everfree forest hunt (contain gore) ·

it seems ok but you really need a editor

Blue Star Dust

Blue Star Dust #3 · Feb 8th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 - Everfree forest hunt (contain gore) ·

5602529 well yes, i do what i can, i dont even speak english, i mean i know somethings but not really much...

zeldawolffang

zeldawolffang #4 · Feb 8th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 - Everfree forest hunt (contain gore) ·

5602713 ok well just so you know for later it's spelled With not whit
also if you keep at it you'll get better :D

Blue Star Dust

Blue Star Dust #5 · Feb 9th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 - Everfree forest hunt (contain gore) ·

5603275 Thanks, i write mos of the story in my ipod, and the autocorrector kinda messed a little, but i tried to watch out for that, i cant really write whitout autocorrector, because i cant really write in english really, well, i can but i cant express myself how i want, i just try to... but is not the same :(

zeldawolffang