• Member Since 17th Jul, 2014
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Fohawk Fury


I guess I am doing this again.

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This story is a sequel to Wanted


I am Chuck. A few years ago, I was brought to this awful world. Being a Wanted man. We fought, some died, some escape, one left behind. I am that one, or so I thought. I must now find another way back home, and with the help of some friends, we will find a way home, all while being Hunted.

BE SURE TO READ WANTED BEFORE READING THIS STORY.

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Comments ( 18 )

Will we finally find out why they did all this? And why children?

6911267 as stated in the last book, we will find out more and more as the story goes on.

YUS! The sequel has arrived! And I'm lovin' it! Keep it up, Fohawk Fury! :pinkiehappy:

6913105 Agreed! The wonderful story of Equine stupidity and Human ingenuity continues!

Hey loved i loved it. But there were some grammatical errors here and there that need to be patched up. Still overall its a good concept i just hope you're able to iron out any problems you might have so i can enjoy the story even more!!!!!

6969722 Hey, thanks man! Also, thanks for the constructive criticism! I welcome it with open arms! :pinkiehappy:

I think that the way he comes home is when the UN makes a portal to that world and kicks some ass.
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Finally. Needs a little fine tuning though.

"I'm sorry, but we have no choice. Be gone with you!"

no your not, your happy to be a xenocidal bitch

FIRE FIRE FIRE BURN THE FARMS BURN THE BARRACKS BURN FOOD BURN THE WOOD BURN IT ALL TO ASH THEN BURN IT TOO!!!!

6911267 I would like them to take some history books (world war 1 and 2) and have the sweat bead down there heads at the fact this isn't our first fight.
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Hey guys, just an update. Life has been really crazy and I haven't had any time to type up anything new. Things have calmed down a little so I am back to work on the first chapter, thanks for sticking around!

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