• Member Since 24th Jan, 2015
  • offline last seen Nov 9th, 2020

Toothsome


Comments ( 9 )
Charyb #2 · May 24th, 2015 · · 2 ·

A story after my own heart, sug. Could do with some proofreading, but the concept's hot.

Found a minor thing you may want to edit.

"Oh I know Applejack, but I keep it in my room... encase I have visitors. You know how ponies can be, no one reads anything."

That should be, "in case".

This is so awesome

I laughed my ass of at this.

10/10 IGN

Applejack, that screams for revenge! Lol.

Login or register to comment