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Alone

Trouble Tuesdays

She thought she did the right thing. She left because her oldest friend turned on her. So it was okay to leave, right? Then why does she feel so alone?

(It's suppose to be sad but, I don't think I met the marker quiet yet)

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VampDash

VampDash #1 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · 3 · ·

Eh.... she is but she isn't. She's trying to have things be back to the way they were when she and Dash were in Flight Camp since it's clear those were the best times of her life. So then she finds out Dash just keeps talking about these OTHER friends of hers and BARELY about her... you can see where this is going.

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #2 · Dec 14th, 2017 · · ·

The concept is good, but the story seems rushed and there are spaces that need serious detail. If you want help, go to my homepage and put up a comment. I copy the document, make some changes and show it to you, to see what you think. If you don't want help, that's fine too. Just tell me when you've updated it.