Invisible Magic

When neither of the girls can get Fluttershy to go to the doctors to treat her cough, its up to Angel to persuade her and Discord to actually get her there. But is it really just a cough?
Disclaimer: I don't own the picture.
Also its mature because it has suggestive scenarios.

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Signs and inner sins · 26th Jan 2015 · 2,333 words
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Desperate times call for... · 21st Mar 2015 · 1,171 words
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Treatment and Support · 24th Jun 2015 · 1,088 words
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MlpFluttershy

MlpFluttershy #1 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · Signs and inner sins ·

Discord clicked with his paw and within seconds, no moments they were transported to a hill. It overlooked Ponyville and with the sun setting, this would be a romantic moment.
“Wait romantic?” Fluttershy thought, her cheeks getting all the more brighter.

Did Fluttershy break the 4th wall or were those her thoughts?

Other than that, really excited for you to continue this!

bluebelle

bluebelle #2 · Jan 28th, 2015 · 1 · · Signs and inner sins ·

That was epic!

Ugly-Duckling123

Ugly-Duckling123 #3 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · · Signs and inner sins ·

Loved it, just a tip though, do something with their 'thoughts' so the readers know it's them thinking and not someone speaking

Hope Fluttershy gets better

MlpFluttershy

MlpFluttershy #4 · Jan 29th, 2015 · 2 · · Signs and inner sins ·

5563707 You were totally referring to me there, weren't you?

So I'm wondering if Flutters is gonna die. There's both a sad and tragedy tag on the story, so I can see that happening. Also, BlindBlossom has written another story where Discord has to deal with Fluttershy's death, so I can actually see this story heading down that same path. I seriously hope not, but I can see it happening.

If Flutters does die though, I'm glad we are able to see her and Discord form a relationship. (Go Fluttercord! You are my OTP! ) Most stories just cover Fluttershy dying and Discord's reaction, but I can tell this one will let us see them bond and grow in love (OMG! That sounded cheesy and sappy! ) Unfortunately for us readers, that will make it all the harder to handle if Fluttershy does die... Thanks a lot, BlindBlossom!