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Twidashforever


Something isn't beautiful because it lasts.

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Comment posted by Twidashforever deleted Feb 4th, 2015

Gotta love the way this site works, three seconds after this makes the front page it gets a down vote lol.

It's amazing how a fandom about the magic of friendship has so many haters.

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but think how mutch they need to be buthurt to downvote it so fast ! (you know that it totaly meant that you doing good job right ?) haters gonna hate !

Woot for another story already! I wonder when Taz will learn about Sunshine's true identity.

I have no idea how there are so many dislikes. This is THE best MLP: FiM series I have ever read, and it's fortunately still going... Never stop going.

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That will be some fun times. Well... not for them.




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The odd thing is I got like five of them after the story was off the front page, it's not featured in any groups or made the popular box. So... are they are tracking me just to down vote my stories? How else could they find it?

I've driven myself nuts with these questions. Haters gonna hate right?

Thank you for enjoying it though! The next chapter will be out soon. (Tus-Wen)

oh my god poor Taz is this going to backfire on them later? also will dayspring ever reveal himself? find out in the next chapter of TiM!!!!
hopefully.:twilightsmile:

YES! I found this at 11 last night and I was like yup, sleep, gone.

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lol. next chapter will be out tomorrow!


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it's way to early to see that happen. :rainbowderp:

5607852 i know i just love these stories

There is a problem with the riddle. Mainly:

“Closer than you expect but never seen,

Fighting for a love never known,

Older than eyes can see,

What am I?”

The other parts are facts. Constants. They never change. Love, however, is different for every person and thing. The riddle is unsolvable, because everyone has a different meaning to the word love. To the one saying the riddle, it means 1 things, to every other person that hears it, they all have a different answer, so it's unsolvable.

Ps. The answer is: Death.

5610611 I've been considering how to answer your comment without giving anything away. I don't think there is any real way to do it though.

You're right, riddles are normally generic that don't apply to any specific person.

“No.” The sphinx smiled as it spoke. “My life is in no danger here as I pose no threat; I’ve only come to talk to you.”

This one was for Luna.

So i have been thinking about these new antagonists especially the red one. at first i was thinking what in the hell could be more powerful than night, then i realized that nothing is. so the only way they could do anything is in the shadows, or just with invisibility. my main question is why do they want to fuck with twi's family. It has proven to be the most idiotic thing anyone can do.

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I'll tell you, I'm in constant bite-my-tongue mode with this story.

I want to say to much, but it could all be spoilers lol. I'll just say, you're not asking the right question.

Keep reading, things are going to happen... (When is another matter)

Any thoughts on the riddle?

seeing the riddle originally thoughti t was just Luna, but it didn't match the wine older than eyes can see. My best guess is death or time. Both cannot be seen and both can be sacrifice for love.

"It was all for not, he was running to try to avoid punishment" needs to be changed to "It was all for naught"

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Good find, thanks.

That's deffinatly a phrase I should stay away from lol. I keep using the wrong word.

She had one thing that made everything else worth wild

Worth while?
I didn't notice any other problems, but I wasn't looking too closely.
Great story, I'm excited to see how the Taz/Nighttide relationship works out. Also I wonder who the mare Taz actually does have a thing for is. Only one way to find out, onward reading!

Amazing chapter! I think all good things come to a end is my new phrase. as for nite's condition, I think her dad is using her mom as a hostage.

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That's definitely a possibility.

i would love to see more into Nighttide's past and about her mother.
so far the book is coming along great i can't wait for the climax of the story. :rainbowwild:
I am also looking foreword to you abusing my feels as the last books did. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowhuh::fluttercry::ajsleepy::rainbowlaugh::pinkiegasp:

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Next chapter should be out tommorow.

It'll be a bit cloppy though lol

Some things are worth taking the time out for, even if you're not in the mood.

Indeed. That was hot. And Sweet. But mostly hot.

Man I can't wait to see were you're going with Dayspring. I need to know. :pinkiehappy:

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You'll have to forgive me, with so many new characters I've got my work cut out trying to establish them all and their relationships with each other.

The story might feel like it's moving at a snail's pace because of that.

Trust me, they'll all get hit upside the head soon enough.

Secrets never stay that way forever.

So many characters! I'm having trouble keeping track! But either way still great chapter, I keep going back and forth on nighttide. Is she good, is she bad. The way she acted in TiM what defines us shows she was bad but after that talk with dayspring I just don know. Can't wait for part 2!

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Nighttide bucked up. I think Dayspring said it best:

“This wasn’t part of the plan, was it? He was supposed to fall for you, not the other way around.”

Too many characters? I was worried about that, anything I can do to help keep it all straight? I doubt you're the only one with that issue.

:twilightsmile: The story is great so far love every part of it.
wish there was a button for applause

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That's what comments are for

:twilightblush:

Thanks!

Lol, despite my goal of 4-6k length chapters, the next two came in at over 6k words... oops.

Oh I like that their are a lot of characters, I'm just terrible with names. frankly the best way for me to remember names in a book is to have something happened to them or for then to do something. But I'm betting that you have something planned.

Oh and I wanted to ask this a while ago...
how do you prononce ataxia? When whenever I say it in my head I always say atatataatxi

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Things will happen soon enough lol

You may miss these times

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/ataxia click on the sound button


[uh-tak-see-uh]

And then Ana turns into a 1/4 dragon monster and starts eating everyone at the Park. :pinkiecrazy:

Ana just smiled and lead the way to the nearest fast food palace. A Hey Burger restaurant loomed across the street.

Taz motioned for Ana to find them seats as he went to the counter to get order their food. The unicorn working the register was a little old to have such a job, but Taz did not pay it any mind.

“Welcome to Hay Burger, home of the hay burger, what can I get you?”

“Let’s get two hey burgers, two large fries and two drinks.”

"Hey burger" needs to be changed to "Hay burger" those few times

(To Taz) - you just had a moment now you ditch her what is wrong with you :applecry:
(To Twidash) - great chapter :twilightsmile:,
I just hope that you're not going where I think your going with Taz and Ana, It's just uncle and niece falling for each other to me is wrong, but after reading your other stories i have learned that love can come from anywhere and anyone.

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Ana is Taz's best friend.

While Ana does love him more than a friend (hey, we don't contol who we fall in love with, regardless what people think is right or wrong), Ataxia pretty much stated the truth as far as their relationship goes:

“Nah, I don’t think Taz likes her like that.”
“Oh, why not?”
“'Cause she’d be pregnant by now if he did,” Ataxia laughed at her joke.

That being said, Taz is fighting some demons of his own, as such he tries to live his life based on his mom's principles, it just kinda backfired right now. (always keep your first promise)

And as far as what society considers right and wrong, well, I'll quote the dragon king on that one

“I’ve been alive longer than I can remember. Remember these words; if there is one true sin in this world, it is to deny who you truly are.”

Or who you truly love.

It's as you said:

love can come from anywhere and anyone.

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That would be pretty funny, wrong but funny lol

5667110 Well look at who her mother is, and her history. It would fit!

This chapter really hit me hard because i'm often told (quite angrily i might add) that I put myself down to much and that i'm talented when i think
i do really bad:pinkiesad2: It's hard to believe them but after reading this maybe their right:unsuresweetie:

:twilightsheepish:sorry didn't mean to ramble anyway i love your stories can't wait for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

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it's so easy to belittle your own achievements. Especially when you're surrounded by talented and gifted people all the time.

While their talents may make them seem special, the real test is not building yourself up when you have the tools, but building yourself up when you have nothing.

It's those people that are truly gifted.

5667761 thanks y'know that really means alot:unsuresweetie: you actually brought a tear to my eye with that:fluttercry:

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I'm happy I could help.

I don't write stuff that sounds good, i write stuff that I truly believe.

I think in each chapter i try to express my ideas a little more, albeit I do worry about coming off too preachy at times.

that was an amazing :rainbowkiss: chapter beautiful ending :twilightsmile:
and the forshadowing :fluttercry: i can already tell you are going to take my heart and rip it into peaces

That Foreshadowing. So what's going to happen? Ana going to die by Nighttide? Taz going to get hurt and Ana go on a rampage and kill someone? Is Dayspring, the older one, going to get murdered in Zecora's home? Is little Dayspring going to give away the doomsday weapon in Twilight's lab over to the enemy as a gift?

What is going to happen!?

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There are questions that you are better off not knowing the answer to.

That's how my editors feel right now after reviewing ch 9.

Me, I gotta figure out how to keep going after writing ch 10... that one took a lot out of me.

5678676 You can keep going by Posting chapter 9 and 10 right now.... Just a suggestion :scootangel:

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Ch 9 will be out on tomorrow :twilightblush:

Although you may regret it :twilightoops:

I'm trying to stay one chapter ahead, (When chapter 11 is edited, i post chapter 10.) However I might have to take a break next week (I'm falling behind with work... that needs to take precedence.) So I might go ahead and just post 10 on Sunday without having 11 ready...

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