When Rainbow Dash's reaction to Twilight's confessions of love goes horribly wrong, Rainbow Dash will learn how far she will go to win back her heart.
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Harmonious Tempest
I have been a fan of the show for a little while now, and have really wanted to add something to the community. This is my first attempt at being a writer, and I have had a lot of fun along the way.
Harmonious Tempest
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kinda just cuts off there at the end, but it's still interesting. i won't favorite it yet, but i will watch and see where this goes.
Okay... what was that? Did you just get bored of writing at the end there or something? Too eager to get this out? Seriously, there's a cliffhanger, and then there's just randomly stopping in the middle of the chapter.
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5551322 Sorry for that. It would appear that when I transfered the story over the FimFiction it only gave me half of it. Give a little bit to get to my actual computer, and i will fix this. Sorry
5553541 Once again sorry about the confusion. The chapter is now complete.
I have decide to delet chapter 2 momentarily. I will hopefully have something better shortly.
you replied to my comment, yet you deleted my comment and I can't read what you replied to me.
That doesn't help.
What did you say?
5585952 I had thought over what you had said, and decide to do a little work on chapter 2. Going back over it I found I kind of wrote myself into a hole. Hopefully I will have something better out soon.
Enjoying this story so far. You layed out a good base and I really like how you portrayed Rainbow as she is struggling with her inner emotions. It's nice seeing a TwiDash story where Rainbow isn't an idiot who has to drill through her own thick skull. You get an upvote, sir.
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I am glad you are enjoying my story so far. I hope I don't disappoint.
awesome chapter, cant wait to read the rest
5845543 Thanks a lot.
Very well written, looking forward to more.
5930096 I appreciate it. I hope I don't disappoint.
I like this story so far. Runs really well except for when you cut it off at the end, but was otherwise stellar.
6081939 Thanks for checking out my story. I am working on the next chapter and am trying to make sure it flows well. Once again Thanks.
And a dragon's going to try and eat her! Yay!
6261818 Maybe
Love it man good job so far
This was one of if not the best twidash story I have read so far
7369836 Thank you. I truly appreciate it. I am really glad you enjoyed my work. Thanks.
I honestly like the inner conflict, mainly because it measure up to something I feel regarding relationships. If they loved me from afar but then got to know who I really was, would they still love me? You did really well in that regard
7869186 Thank you. I find I sometimes feel this way too.