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SongoftheDarquePhoenix


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The Scarlet Ibis, eh? Read that for English Class... Good story. On to your story...
This is... Good. I don't normally read sad, but I have to make an exception for this. Scootaloo is one of my favorite ponies, and... This kinda moved me. I didn't shed a tear but still... I could (sadly) imagine this happening. Have a thumb, sir.

Glad to see this posted here.

Well... that was very emotional. Unfortunately, I didn't cry- but that's gotten somewhat normal for me. Still very well written.
-Randomosity19

:fluttercry: bravo good sir....bravo

Dang....just dang...:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

No words coming from me. :fluttercry:

Don't cry...:applecry:

Son of a bitch, don't cry.

Dammit... :pinkiesad2:

excelente!

(excelent for derps:derpytongue2:)

I listenned to Death Island piano theme while reading this.

Needless to say I cried like a little bitch.:fluttercry:

And another heartwarming fic that makes me tear up.... thanks, I needed it.

The whole time i'm HNNNGGGGing,
pretty good book i gotta say :rainbowdetermined2:

FUCKING MANLY TEARS

The whole fic was sad but I didn't start tearing up until the ending and when I got there I bawled. Well done sir...well done :raritycry:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:heart::scootangel: rest in peace, scootaloo

Very good.

my only complaint was the doctor was so easily willed into letting dash take scootaloo. I feel like they would have protested it in her severe condition, as it was likely to kill her. I would have loved to see dash sneak scoot out after her request was denied (she knows scoot doesn't have much time, and shes willing to do anything to grant scoots last wish)

Other than that it wa very heart warming :fluttercry:

i wasnt just sheding tears. i was bawling. :( oh scootaloo.. v.v R.I.P. little one :scootangel:

Gosh... Deja-vu. I kinda wrote a story called Make a Wish, it was on EqD a few weeks ago. This is shockingly similar.

Still, cool story brony.

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I can assure you, any similarities are purely coincidental. MLP is not one of my main fandoms. MLP does not even register as one of the subfandoms for which I read/write.

In all honesty, the inspiration for this fic came from "My Little Dashie" (as much as I dislike the story) ,the Make a Wish Foundation- and, as previously mentioned, "The Scarlett Ibis"

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That is something that, had I thought of it, I would have included.

That being said, I think Scootaloo's plea was the deciding factor.

:pinkiesad2: scoots and rainbow, the 2 best sisters in equestria

RIP
Scootaloo
2010-2012
:scootangel:
:pinkiesad2:

Daaw....WHY!??:raritydespair:
*rest in peace, Scoot*
Good story, doe.

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