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(Attention: Permanently Cancelled.) How do you deal with an enemy that can easily replace everypony you've ever known? Equestria may appear peaceful and serene on the outside, but a silent war has been taking place for the last six months. The Changeling Queen, Chrysalis, may have been defeated, but her return had set wheels in motion. Every Queen has a King.

Jasmine Dhula finds herself the newest, and only zebra, member of the Adventurer Academy. The Academy is the front line in the current war on Changelings, but the battlegrounds are constantly changing. The thing about changelings is that they could be anypony. Another member of the Adventurer Academy, Crosswind, finds himself on an express trip to Ponyville.

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Comments ( 9 )

*Sigh*
Yet another Chrysalis/changeling fic. Excuse me while I smash my head against the desk. :ajbemused:

Good story so far! Cant wait to see where this goes! :moustache:

544344 This is actually a remake of my very first fic. Originally the enemies were cultists, but due to the success of "Past Sins" at the time it was shot down for being "unoriginal." :twilightsmile: The Changelings actually make considerably more sense than cultists so it's better this way anyway. Thanks for not down voting regardless. :pinkiehappy:

544397 Great, I was worried that it'd suck compared to what I'm writing at now, but I think I managed to revamp it enough so that's not an issue. :scootangel:

More fun and boys-own adventure than I was expecting from the synopsis - I'm interested, especially since we know what Jasmine doesn't know. (Minor quibble: how could Equestria create semi-real world planes and then use them for secret missions? They're big and noisy, everyone pegasus would go "what's that?")

544435 Yeah, all the synopsises (synopsi?) I came up with sucked, bad. Then I came up with this gem and although it doesn't quite fit the story yet, it should do at some point. The Adventurer Academy were originally planned as a sort of "X-Men" of Equestria. Although that idea has been majorly edited, I wrote the plane scene and loved it too much to scrap it. The Adventurer Academy do have access to top-grade equipment, and that plane was an example of that.

547560 Nightmare Moon Cultists was the original plan. They were set on causing a second Lunar war by indoctrinating officials and worming their way into all positions of the government. It makes more sense to have Changelings killing off officials and replacing them with their own. Indoctrination is normally a timely and untrustworthy process. Cthulu cultists would have been funny, so people would've taken it less seriously... this is a pony fic though, so that might have been more appropriate.

547816 Cthulhu is 1000x better than changelings.

Overall, the story's not that bad. It's just that I've seen alot of chyrisalis/changeling fics lateley.
It's getting a tad repetative.

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