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Sugarcube66


Whilst 'm not as big into my little pony as when I was younger, I do wish to get back into it. And to do that, I intend to reorganize my stories slowly. Give me time.

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A foal appears on Twilight's doorstep one night in rain. Twilight takes her in for the night, but is unsure what to do with the baby unicorn filly.

Note: Nyx is from Past Sins by Penstroke.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

If you think writing Apple Jack is hard just try writing Zecora ( the zebra, I don't know how to spell her name :twilightblush: )

5592052 Zecora and yes I know, but she probably not gonna appear in most of my stories. I f***ing hate rhymes cause I suck at them.

5592081 She is a pain in the *** to write . No wonder shes not on the show much .
Anyway good job on the story and i'll be watching this story

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Zecora. Ya missed the a sugar-cube:ajsmug:

Nice chapter, to be honest I like them longer, but it is a nice story.

Cheese Sandwich, Pinkie's husband

...Pinkies Clone, and husband. Well I just think the clone thing makes it a bit boring, but I think I started to accept this shipping.

Fluttershy's and Discord's

To be honest in one way I like this ship, but then again it is boring that such Characters, always get the guy they meet the first time. Well in Games it works that way, the first Character they meet, is usually the boyfriend/girlfriend.

Well and I don´t like it, that Discord get´s Fluttershy as his Wife, more or less just because she was his first friend.

''Yes-a-roni. It's Twily's choose at the end of the day. I'd ain't gonna pick for her and I believe that Starry would be cute under the care of Twilight.''

Maybe you should read it again, I think I noticed that even Flutershy seems to knew thing which Twilight didn´t told them till now.

''Don't worry your spikes off, you'll be fine.'' said Twilight with a reassuring smile.

No your not. Well because of his look, his size, and his personality, I don´t think Spike X Rarity would work, but well I accept it in this story.

''Oh yea. Mom, I'll walk her down, I have to meet up with the crusaders to head to middle school anyway.''

I have nothing against it, but I would say the first day of school, is probably a task for the mother.

Hearth's Ruby was a hybrid, of a dragon and unicorn to be exact. She was red in color, hence the name Ruby, with darker red dragon wings but her horn was normal in color. Her eyes were similar to Nyx's, aka they had cat-like daggers running through them, but they were also heterochromic meaning they were different colors, hers were blue and green. And her mane was a mess of purple and green.

As long as I don´t get to know his personality in your fanfiction, I really don´t like Rarity X Spike.

Sometimes I´m not sure why I don´t like it, but I´m pretty sure it has nothing to do with him being a Dragon, but more how he looks like.
Honestly I was never a fan of those shippings, like Rainbow X Soarin, which looks like she would only like him because of him being a Wonderbolt, Spike X Rarity, because well he can be as mature as he wants to be, they often make him look like an idiot in the show in some way, and he always seems like a child.
Pinkie Pie X Cheese, well I´m not sure if I like him more than before, but still the reason that they are mostly the same character makes me well disaprove a little if I see this pairing. (I hope that sentence works that way)
Twilight X Flash .....A few month´s before I said that the worst OC´s have more personality like him, and it depense on how you see it, that you could find even more reasons why he even is a bad character.
I mean at first he was just there, and I thought nothing of it, but after another comment I had to think about him, and thought that he had no real personality.

Well the only pairing I really don´t like is Rarity X Spike, and even it even made me shudder as I imaged them being together, but I think I can live with that.
However, every picture I saw of him, even if he looks older, he is somehow an abomination, either he has that Baby head with an more or less cool Body, or he has that Baby head, and a clunky body.....yeah I think I wanted to say that.

Well at least Ruby looks okay, but I have to question Scootaloo, The legs are looking good in a way, but it nearly looks like she would make doctors to make a Rainbow Dash out of her.

I think Pinkie might have had Pegasus somewhere in her family... Look at Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake, one's a Pegasus and the other's a unicorn yet their parents are both Earth ponies

hope this is updated soon as its pretty good

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