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Luna is just too cute, MOAR! (/^_^)/
Ok, I thought I had already read this story when I saw Ray the diplomat... then I saw the top of the similar list which almost entirely Ingress. So I have sort of read this! In a oneshot NMM incarnation! But full stories are better than oneshots, so yay.
5539510 This is a prelude to that story
If Luna keeps being so cute I fear for my health
All of my yes!
I like those RoyalsXHuman stories.
Muy Bueno muchacho.
I eagerly await the next chapter!
Commence read.
Nothing wrong with extra story goodness.
Now to await more shenanigans.
A.P., why do I never get bored of your stories? Especially the Affliction and Ingress series.
Well now.
This reminds me why I love Luna so much!
I think it should be "Thou art", not "Thou is". There are also other instances like "thou are", "is thou", "ist thou" that should be using "art". There is also one "thou would wish" that I think should be "thou wishest".
So...adorable...but I don't read clop, so...agh, fuck it, I'll just skip the clop.
*Favorites*
The huge, titanium alloy balls on this guy...
5543860 smart
5544670 russian balls must be no?
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So. Much. WANT!!!! Please update soon! (No rush though. You are an artist, and I would never tell a literary genius how to do there work
LUNA IS SOOOO CUTE!
HOW ARE YOU SO FUCKING GOOD AT THIS?!
This was adorable~
5553585 Agreed.
Cranked that adorable to 11 didn't we? It worked, I'm sold.
As awesome as Luna is, how much longer until we get a Diamond Tiara Ingress Story? And Apple Bloom since you already did the other two CMC, even if one was a changeling.
5555656 Click dis
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WOOOOOO! Can not wait for Diamonds Pink Pony Plot to be pounded.
5555731 I''m still trying to decide on her personality and the overarching story. Rich snobby girl that pretends to not want the hard dicking, but TOTALLY does. Orrr, the rich snooby girl who is completely aware of what she is doing and hamfistedly tries to coax him into screwing her, like 'I'll let you do me for a thousand bits! ONLY for the bits, though!'
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Seen the second one done already though it really was done for the bits. The first one sounds like it'd be more fun. Sorta Tsundere like
It's nice to see that the human is not as shy and timid like so many clop stories. You have my like good sir
Heh...heh, too much energy...need insulin shot! Hnnnnnng.
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You're right.
Thou, Thee, and Archaic Grammar
Archaic conjugation of verbs
that reaction is so DAW
I think there was an error every single time Luna used her old-style speech. "Thou is" was, I think, the most prominent offender. "Thou art" is correct in that case.
Anyhoo, I love Ingress stories. Though not one has been able to top the Silver Spoon story, at least in my opinion, I've got a good feeling about this one.
ermergerd I was laughing too hard at this 8'D
The human is so blunt, and not afraid to show it! XD hahaha!
Keep it up!
So far every story I have read in the Ingress universe has been great and this one continues that tradition. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I had to go back and check to see if this had a complete or incomplete tag. Glad I saw what I saw, or else I was gonna flip out over here! XD
Overall good story so far, I can see a variety of ways the story can go, which I like. I also love how Luna reacts the way she does, makes it believable
There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes everyonce in a while, but nothing that made me cringe wholeheartedly.
Long story short: it has promise, don't rush yourself, and just watch out a tiny bit for the grammar :)
I've read the follow up tale that came out first, but I like this one more. Then again, that could just be because it's going to be longer and we get to know more about Ray and Lula's relationship as it develops.
a vary good start to what is looking to be a really good story.
so when is the next chapter???
Harts Fire
Pretty fantububoulusly amazing. More more more!
You must continue this awesome story!
Please continue this story.
DIS SO CRAZY!!! Luna is so cute!
Wow. He's a pretty good flirt.
So...gonna update this little beauty at some point?
Hmm I like where this is going keep doing great.
Darn... You never stop to impress me...


Luna shall be the only one have the spotlight here 
And your amazing Luna speaking lines make an impression on everyone for sure
The fun shall be doubled soon i guess?
Nah just kidding
Came back to re-read this. Just makes me wish even more that it was continued :(
I request more on this
it's been nearly 2 years
i now have crippling depression