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"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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This story is a sequel to Symphony of Life


A Friendly Warning: This story contains M/M shipping as well as an Alicorn OC, so if you don't like one or both of those, you know where the exit button is. And since this is a third part of the Harmonic stories, it is also highly recommended that you should read the other two first before attempting to read this one.

A few years after the death of Color Spectrum, the adopted Prince Harmonic tries to move on with his life. He does so by getting back into music once again in hopes to find someone to have him fall in love again.


A huge thank you to his highness PrinceCelestia for doing the cover art. Also a big thank you to HauntingSpiritRisingMoon and Solereclaimer for proofreading.

Music for this fic are: Mozart's Lullaby (Music Box Sound); Spanish Dances No.1. Malaguena Op. 21 by Pablo de Sarasate in the 2nd Movement; Waltz of the Flowers by Tchaikovsky in the 3rd Movement; Pope's Betrayal from The Red Violin soundtrack, played by Joshua Bell and Prelude of Cello Suite No. 1 by J. S. Bach in the 4th Movement.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 49 )
Comment posted by M D Evershade deleted Jan 24th, 2015

5538078 In plain English, the following means:

M/M= Male/Male shipping.

M/F= Male/Female shipping.

F/F= Female/Female shipping.

Comment posted by M D Evershade deleted Jan 24th, 2015

Seems like this one will work out pretty cool like the last two keep it Goin dude

5538121 BTW I really like where it's going even if it's only on the first chapter, it's really cool!

5545399 Thank you. Just out of curiosity, have you by any chance read the previous other two stories?

5545405 No, but I'm going to before I continue with reading this story so I don't walk into the story blindly anymore! :ajsmug:

5545457 Good idea, trust me, it will make so much sense.

5545463 I'm doing a little thing right now but when I can I'm so going to read them

I enjoyed this chapter. Harmonic still misses Color, but I see he is trying to fulfill his promise to him.

Ok. This error has gone on long enough. Privet is incorrect. The word you want to use is private.

5558945 Thanks, I'll go back to correct this now.

5558965
Nice Chapter, I really enjoyed it. I look forward to the next one. BTW I finished the first story and I'm moving on to the second! /) :rainbowkiss: (\

5558965 Hey Ink, can you help me on something when you get Online?

5562438 Just some working with this. How can you make a story visible to others when it's incomplete like this one? (Remember I just started making stories so I need some help)

5562447 Well, first is that with the icon that has your name, click at and it'll show you a list that say things like "Stories", "Blogs", "Groups"... Click on stories where it says "New Stories". From there you try to fill out some infomation and what not, with that's all done, make sure you click save. There when that happens, it'll look like the same page but it'll say something like "(So and So story) has been edited, click on it. It'll show you the layout of your story. Next you click on "Add a New Chapter", once there, you can write or paste your story when it's in edit form. But remember, once you got your story that's at least a thousand words long, SAVE IT. Then you click on the name of your story and you should see the chapter along with the number of words. The next bit is to submit it. Now, if it's denied, don't panic, just try to follow what needs to be added/changed so it can be uploaded on this site.

I don't know if this is any help. But good luck though.

5562485 Alright, that helps a lot, I already have a 600 word story being created so thanks for the help man

5562485 Do I press save when editing the chapters? and then sumit when it's 1000+?

5566580 Absolutely. If you want others to see it.

5566599 Okay, thanks dude for the help! I just finished Ch.3 in my story so it's now 1000+ so I'm going to submit it and keep working on it, good luck with your awesome story man!

Quill Feathers will die.

Handsome not hansome
Wear not ware

5588576 thanks. Let me fix those.

Well it was not what I expected but it turned out sad still.

Comment posted by Dark starlight deleted Feb 12th, 2015

So sorry about that. The ending was quite Disney like and fluttery. liked how his old home town was revisited and seemingly modern-day like. Still a good sequel

5623301 Hmm... Fair enough, but I was trying to find something to being to an end to this story. It's been fun, but as they say, all good things must come to an end.

"rapping a royal consort while being under the influence.”
raping* heh. Also wouldn't the rape be enough to have him be guilty? Note being a royal consort shouldn't really affect the sentence.
privet >_< no.

I hereby sentience you, Quill Feathers, to be banished out to sea. You shall be taken to the middle of the ocean where you shall be put on a small raft with only a few days of food and water, where you shall drift alone for the rest of your days.

Wow. That's really brutal. I expected a harsh prison sentence, not a death sentence.

5625530 Hmm... Point taken. I've already changed the wording a wee bit.

5625534 You could blame Tharwin1800 for that. Since he was the only one who voiced out.

5865678 By-the-way, the warning tag has been removed. Thanks for that input, but understand that when I first wrote that, it made me really uncomfortable. I mean, sure, I have written about death before, but rape? I have written about a pony that survived a suicide attempt. A pony that confessed that he had murdered his own parents. And don't get me starred with Color's death. But rape? I personally assumed that those who went into this story might had been as uncomfortable as I was. That's why I had it up, to give the reader a bit of a heads up.

God damn that was a ride. A certain wonderful, gut-wrenching, tear jerkingly beautiful ride from start to finish. Watching Color pass was like Wash from Firefly all over again.
You are one of three people to have ever made me cry. It truly is sad to see it conclude.

5942773 The Tenth Doctor when he regenerated, and my grandfather when he passed away.

The Orchestra's gonna need a new conductor... *Holds up Pitch prefect's severed head and smiles like a maniac* Cause this ones a little "flat"...But don't "fret" about it. just go hire a less shitty one.

5944010 ...I have only ever truly cried once in my 14 years of living until today... I say, Bravo sir, bravo!

In all of my 14 years of life. I never felt so much emotion reading this series. I hope you continue these stories about harmonica.

6341306 Two things, his name is Harmonic. And two, as of now, I don't know if I could continue to write for Harmonic and Color at this point. Even if I do, I still don't know where to begin.

6341306 And as an afterthought, thank you.

This series was gutwrenchingly beautiful. Bravo, dear author, bravo.

While sad to see this series end, I'm glad you ended it on such a high note. A series like this could go on for a long time.

Of all the stories I have read on this site, only one other series has reduced me to a quivering mass of tears. (I'm such a softy.:rainbowlaugh:)

:eeyup:

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