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Inkquill


I am an aspiring young writer with a deep love for the classical arts. I enjoy opera, drawing, literature and my ultimate goal to become a full fledged author.

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This story was writen by my good and dear friend Atomicpuffin, who sadly is not longer writing for eh MLP fandom. This is a great shame, because she truly did produce great works of fanfiction that really deserve attention. If you would like to read more of her stories click here. However, because of complex reasons I wont go to much detail into, AP has turned over the ownership of What Happens in Las Pegasus over to me. Now I want to make very clear that this story, even though is legally own by me, is the work of Atomicpuffin. I claim no credit for the creation of this wonderful story what so ever.

Now, I'll sum up shortly what happened. I was writing a genderbend of this story, with permission from AP of course, but i ran into difficulties with publishing. Long story short, to save me the trouble, AP thought it best to turn over the ownership of What Happens in Las Pegasus to me, which I am truly grateful and honored.

Once again, for those who haven't read this story or the other works by Atomicpuffin, I highly encourage it. She is a wonderful author and a true, true friend.

Discord and the girls go to Las Pegasus for a much needed vacation and to strengthen their bonds of friendship. Of course the best laid plans are the first to fall to pieces. After one night of fun the mares wake up to find a few surprises from the previous night. None more so than one pair who wake up to find they got a bit more than they bargained for...such as gold bands.

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This is going to be interesting. update as soon as you can.:heart::yay:

*Snif* *Snif*... I smell a Fluttercord ship here. :raritywink::rainbowkiss:

What's the worst that could happen?"

WELL

uh...

Nah, they're fine!

Loving this so far :rainbowkiss: Can't wait for update! :D

:moustache: "Gosh, close my eyes for a second and I wake up in this stupid hotel room, I wonder what's in the self serve fridge?" $$$$bit$$$bits$$$$

:moustache: "burp" A self serve wet bar?" $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$bits$$$$$$$$$$$$$bits$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

:applejackconfused::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::twilightsheepish::yay::duck:"Were back !"

:moustache: "Hi, my pretty pony:raritystarry:" Rarity ! will you have my ba. . .":rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::yay::raritystarry::ajsmug::twilightoops:

:twistnerd: "Hotel security, Your tab limit is maxed out I must ask for full payment or we call the Sheriff"

:facehoof: "SPIKE !"

MORE !

"What's the worst that could happen?"

There are famous last words. Awesome start, and I can't wait to read more. ^_^

I anticipate many drunken fun times eh? And maybe some Fluttercord? :raritywink:

Gerrrr, "Discord! I-I thought you loved me!" I say sobbing:raritycry:
Ps I'm not rarity.

Can't wait for more!!
I hope you start feeling better soon :twilightsmile:

Aaand one more because something like twenty, and then they'll probably regret everything by morning. This'll be fun. I will say, though: who would name their child Charmin Devil? Is his cutie mark devil horns, then? Hah, oooh, I really don't mind. I'll just never get used to names in the pony world, like, ever.

His heart began to dance the samba in his chest as his mind shut down,

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Can't believe I thought of this here, I'm just gonna leave!

Oh, and hope you get well!

Sorry to hear you've been sick,(had to use 2 sick days myself last week... bleh) take your time, I'm sure the next chapter will be worth the wait.
Looking forward to it! :pinkiehappy:

This is pretty great. You do pretty good "Discord in costume"-jokes and the characters are handled pretty well.

Man, they are kinda jerks to that waitress, but I'll chalk it up to stress. Like I do with the fact that no-one sees any potential trouble in trying to get the Lord of Chaos completely smashed for trivial reasons.

I'm looking forward to more, I hope your health will get better and stay great.

Happy writing.

Sound like the Hangover movie xD
Is Discord going to wake up with a tiger?

Dawww! I really hope AJ or RD throws up on the other afterwards and they fight or something. Idk thats the kind of thing they'd do.
And WHY U NO PAIRING FS AND DISCORD TOGETHER ALREADY? PLEASE LET ONE OF THEM SLIP A HINT WHILST THEYRE DRUNK! PLEEAAASE!!!
Or at least make one of the others assume something and talk to either Fluttershy or Discord. I really like this!
Oh, and was that RARIPIE???!!!

5611635 I plead the 5th since I did not hav a say in the pairings, except for one, for the bet. I will b trying to get Ch 3 out as soon as I get over this stupid cold

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh: Discord is sooooooo dead!!! I can't wait!!!! And I'm glad your feeling better!

:moustache: "Even in Los Pegasus I'm cleaning up their messes ! "
:twilightoops: Not enough OCD
:pinkiegasp::raritydespair: Too much OOC
:flutterrage: Too rushed
:rainbowhuh: Not cool enough
:ajbemused: Wut da buck?
:derpytongue2: My bad. .
:moustache: Rarity, Wuts sup with the Adult PPV? Are you on channel 3 ?:raritystarry:
SPIKE!:twilightoops:
:moustache: Just askin.

Discord's soooo dead. And not just because of the others. That's just getting hitched for ya!

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But I had trouble not laughing until I finally just let it all out. What really got me was them getting what I'm guessing is a honeymoon suite. Step it up a notch, am I right? My roommate's giving me funny looks; can't explain this if I tried. Yeeesss, can't wait for more! And glad to hear you're slowly getting better.

EDIT: I actually got an ad here that says "Who will you marry?" I cant't breathe!:rainbowlaugh:

This is pretty funny. Could use another proofread though, some odd sentences and missing words here and there. Rarity's scene in particular, the ending should have been "as she noticed legs..", because as it is now, it seems that the legs only then wrap around her. Also, a hint there, maybe of something pink or a mention of messy, curly hair, would have better foreshadowed the reveal of who she woke up with.
Pinkie's ramble about being sorry, well, it felt a little off. The gist of it makes sense and Rarity letting her down gentle was kinda heartwarming, but it just felt a little off. Also, shouldn't Spike be seething with jealousy at the mere hint that Rarity was involved with someone else?

Loved Discord's bit. Very promising. Now write more.

Happy writing.

OMG! Poor Discord lol! I wonder what Fluttershy's reaction'll be? And the mane five? Oh dear:derpytongue2:

And now, my reaction....

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::heart::heart::heart::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Thank you. :twilightsmile:

WHAT THEY FREAKING ELOPED AND THEN WENT TO THE FREAKING HONEYMOON SUITE OF A HOTEL? THATS SO FUNNY!:rainbowlaugh:

Uh oh....:rainbowderp:

Great chapter! Great STORY! :twilightsmile:

When I read the part about Twilight being drunk, I would imagine her to be a somewhat angry drunk and kinda of yell or cry about things that she would never dwell on when she's sober.

But it's your story. Plus it makes sense for Twilight to giggle a lot. After all when she was going crazy about the letter, she giggled quite often! :pinkiecrazy:

2 and a half months you've left us on this cliffhanger! You're killing me. You're really killing me.

I'm jus' kidding xD. In all seriousness I'm impatiently patiently waiting for the next chapter and wondering if you are ok and still possibly working on this story? if you're not you've just crushed my hopes and dreams

5941071 no worries I am still going to finish this one. Its just that mending bonds took a lot out of me n I'm taking a bit to get back. Plus I was in that universe so long I have to remind myself what I want out of this one.

Sorry for the long wait but this will be completed I promise

>reads title
>expects clop fic
>gets something good

how do you do this

:rainbowlaugh:
OMG,that was a good one mostly the ending. Love it:rainbowkiss:

Yeah that was a good speech . Onward --->

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Make your move Spike. . .It's Las Pegasus !

YYYEEE! Me so happy! Love this!

I was laughing way harder than I should've at the end!:rainbowlaugh:

Haha was the speech a Game of Thrones reference with Theon Greyjoy? I hope Discord won't get castrated ;)

5958984 haha finally! You win, yes after the last episode n their GOT reference I thought it would be funny to make my own :pinkiecrazy:

*Fist pump* finally!

This is really entertaining. Could use slight polish here and there, but you are doing well and you manage to avoid the pitfall many fics fall into, which is have the inner voice of the characters spell out their feelings too much, to melodramatic effect. And you are making a pretty good "twice shy"-story.

And Discord's little number here at the end is great.

Now write more. Happy writing.

This was an awesome chapter! I'm guessing she found their marriage certificate lol. Don't worry about the next chapter until you're better. Don't push yourself at work either, I've been in that position before. Just relax and focus on getting better. Thank you for posting this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

If Charmin is up to something, I hope Discord punches him. Or has an alligator chase him off. Either works.

And don't worry about updating. That can come once your back heals, since health is more important than ponies. We can handle the wait.

I'm confused... Who's Charmin? Have I missed something?

Btw, great job! I love this story so far.

Comment posted by Commander Darklight deleted May 18th, 2015

5990180 Charmin was the owner of the club that was attempting to flirt with fluttershy in Ch 2

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He's also a talking pack of loo roll.
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Nice little chapter.

Man, Rarity only used to get herself into trouble with her bad character judgement. Now she is inflicting it on poor Shy. Oh well, I just saw the newest episode, I kinda want more jealous Discord.

You format speech kinda weirdly though. I suggest having the "she said"s right after speech, not a line down. So "When I say, "do this"." or "Do this", I said."

I hope that makes sense.

I wish you a quick recovery. Happy writing.

5991354 Charmin got them that fancy limo for their travel to that address, because he wanted them to enjoy the go. :trollestia:

No Rarity what are you doing!*face palm*

Sorry about your back, I hope it starts to feel better and I'm sorry you still haft to work.

People usually take pictures at weddings...
Please? I want visual commemoration! Seriously, they need a TARDIS right now.

You know, DIscord does have that nifty trick where he can show you the past. I mean, that was his first appearance and all. I'm sure that spell would help here.

Great work so far. :raritywink:

6012522 true but when your castor was drunk at the time how much can he really show you lol. I believe that spell worked because it was what he saw n heard so I'm running with that theory.

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